Comment from melyuki

Excellent

Hi Shirley, beautiful little verse my friend, full of happy thoughts and so attuned to nature and its glory. Awesome photo taken from your garden. what a joy to walk through .. I see you love your garden Shirley.. it's smiling for you... thanks for sharing and have a fabulous evening. cheers to you, mel xxx

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

Thanks Mel.
:-)

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A nicely executed LyriCat poem. You really bring home the sweet smells that make a flower garden such a joy. The peaceful haven and attuned senses bring it home. Nice photograph of it too. Although, I believe the LyriCat requires a minimum of 3 stanzas.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2016

Thanks .
I am a fan of I Am Cat and liked this format
Unfortunately I must have missed the requirement for three stanzas.
Thanks for pointing that out.
:-) Shirley

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Shirley, this is just beautiful...and it looks like you did a great job on I am Cat's form...I think I might try it...some times sweet girl...sitting in your garden a reminiscing on times passed can bring sad feelings...and sometimes beautiful...I love your poem...and your picture is stunning...very nicely written...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016

Thank you Linda.
You always instil positivity and warmth into a review.
I appreciate that.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 16-Jan-2016

you are so sweet...thank you Shirley...smiling big at ya...xxoo

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Shirley

= Love the picture, certainly complement your poem about the senses.
= Sometimes it is the simplest of things that can sooth a person.
= Well penned and presented, my friend.

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016

Thanks Jax.
I appreciate your kind review as always.
Stay safe.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

Well done . You followed Cat's new form just fine. Walking through a garden, especially one so pretty and full of flagrance, will certainly dissolve any cobwebs and sooth a withered soul. A little nature is so healing for tranquility. Again, nicely done.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016

Thank you Linda.
I appreciate your support and generous review.
:-) Shirley

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

There is a very pleasing tone to this piece. The comparison of the closing lines of both verses tell an interesting tale.

Really liked this one.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016

Thank you.
I appreciate your time and review.
:-) Shirley

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Even without the included image. You paint quite a lovely picture with your words. This was well done and I enjoyed reading it. Good job.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016

Thank you.
I appreciate your time and review.
:-) Shirley