Poetry from the Heart {by Jay}
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "How Can He fly if His Wings Just Cry"Thoughts through my passed Son Jason.
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Comment from aryr
Very touching and so very true. All the thoughts and all the raw emotions are there. Loss of any kind is shattering but the lost of life, of love, of friendship of understanding can be crippling. Acknowledgement and acceptance are not instant and do take time. Sometimes a lifetime. Nothing will ever replace the void. Great words for grief support. Thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
Very touching and so very true. All the thoughts and all the raw emotions are there. Loss of any kind is shattering but the lost of life, of love, of friendship of understanding can be crippling. Acknowledgement and acceptance are not instant and do take time. Sometimes a lifetime. Nothing will ever replace the void. Great words for grief support. Thank you.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Thank you very much AR yr for your wonderful review on the the Sun my sons basically is the death in the family names of heaven with wings I work and she would a man I've received many wonderful reviews and I also received two three star average reviews from people that just don't understand or don't care it's a shame I told the one woman if she calls herself Fox angel to shame that you would give an average review when other people have given five and six dollars on this and it's based on my dead sons look past and his life this is no thank you again this is Ricky 1024 this comment is coming through a ZTE Android phone with Grandma cars in London sentences with no punctuation marks 24 out
Comment from darling
Hello Ricky1024,
This was a very heartfelt, sad and painful write... my sincerest condolences to you and your family. I cannot begin to even imagine the pain of such a loss, my mind will not let me even visit that horrific thought but I pray and cry here with you.
In terms of the piece I did have a couple of things to share:
""Played the Crying and Dying Game' and..." was the word "and" suppose to be there because the next line,""But my cards always and forever... " doesn't seem to make sense? Perhaps it's just me but I wanted to ask just in case.
I also wanted to ask you about the lines, ""Forever resurrected...
"As Christ...
"Seen after Your passing....
"Not once but twice.... " and also in your authors note where you wrote:
"And Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His late Son Jesus Christ,"
I don't understand what you meant by that, could you expound on it?
Again, my deepest condolences to you all and thank you for saving the lives of so many, even through your pain. God bless you.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
Hello Ricky1024,
This was a very heartfelt, sad and painful write... my sincerest condolences to you and your family. I cannot begin to even imagine the pain of such a loss, my mind will not let me even visit that horrific thought but I pray and cry here with you.
In terms of the piece I did have a couple of things to share:
""Played the Crying and Dying Game' and..." was the word "and" suppose to be there because the next line,""But my cards always and forever... " doesn't seem to make sense? Perhaps it's just me but I wanted to ask just in case.
I also wanted to ask you about the lines, ""Forever resurrected...
"As Christ...
"Seen after Your passing....
"Not once but twice.... " and also in your authors note where you wrote:
"And Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His late Son Jesus Christ,"
I don't understand what you meant by that, could you expound on it?
Again, my deepest condolences to you all and thank you for saving the lives of so many, even through your pain. God bless you.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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