Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a nice, colorful one-line haiku with good concrete autumn imagery. Syllable count is within proper limit. Thanks for entering the contest, and good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

---

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for the encouragement, Jeanie, and for the wonderful contest. This was a great idea, and it's nice to try something different.

Have a great night, and good luck to you if you chose to enter!

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

A very beautiful image you have created with this one line haiku, you have kept to the rules of the proper syllables. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

---

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review. I am so glad that you found the image to be beautiful! I also appreciate the lovely stars tremendously,

Have a wonderful day.

Gratefully,

Vista K

reply by Jackarrie on 10-Sep-2015

You are welcome x