2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "1/6/1 (Blue)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
55 total reviews
Comment from EMB
Yes, there are many reasons why blue is such an amazing color, and you highlight some with your words and picture. But blue isn't all that great when eating a steak or checking for injuries. Haha!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Yes, there are many reasons why blue is such an amazing color, and you highlight some with your words and picture. But blue isn't all that great when eating a steak or checking for injuries. Haha!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from evilynne
It is a lovely statement about your favorite color, well illustrated in blue (what else). It seems to fit the required format quite well. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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It is a lovely statement about your favorite color, well illustrated in blue (what else). It seems to fit the required format quite well. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Evi :)
Comment from mermaids
This poem could be my theme song, I have always been obsessed with the color blue. Your use of words is excellent, the 1-6-1 form is not any one but your words give rise to the color blue.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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This poem could be my theme song, I have always been obsessed with the color blue. Your use of words is excellent, the 1-6-1 form is not any one but your words give rise to the color blue.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you mermaids :) I found out that a lot of people like the color blue.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poem fits the constraints of this style of poetry perfectly. Blue is my favorite color too. Good luck with your writing prompt entry
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Your poem fits the constraints of this style of poetry perfectly. Blue is my favorite color too. Good luck with your writing prompt entry
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Alan :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Well written 1-6-1 it is nice and short and says what you want to say in a few words perfectly. I often do this poems when I am short on time, mostly succesful
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Well written 1-6-1 it is nice and short and says what you want to say in a few words perfectly. I often do this poems when I am short on time, mostly succesful
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
This short form is much more difficult to create than it appears. You managed it well and included a pure, mono-rhyme. Your animated artwork and background color choice reinforced your theme well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan, from Oregon
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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This short form is much more difficult to create than it appears. You managed it well and included a pure, mono-rhyme. Your animated artwork and background color choice reinforced your theme well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan, from Oregon
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joan :)
Comment from bamagal
The author has conveyed in a precise poetic form why blue is her favorite color. By using blue as the background of her box, she emphasizes the blue theme.
And yet, the poem makes me laugh, because it's such a simple statement of fact with no adornments.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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The author has conveyed in a precise poetic form why blue is her favorite color. By using blue as the background of her box, she emphasizes the blue theme.
And yet, the poem makes me laugh, because it's such a simple statement of fact with no adornments.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you bamagal :)
Comment from kiwijenny
Blue is my favorite hue too..who knew..
I always pick blue ..I like colors that share blue too like Jade greens and purples and turquoise ...cobalt blue is my absolute favorite
Well penned blues make me happy
God bless
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Blue is my favorite hue too..who knew..
I always pick blue ..I like colors that share blue too like Jade greens and purples and turquoise ...cobalt blue is my absolute favorite
Well penned blues make me happy
God bless
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you kiwijenny :) Cobalt blue is my favorite too :)
Comment from bard owl
What a super entry to the 1-6-1 contest. You have followed the rules and produced a fine, rhyming poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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What a super entry to the 1-6-1 contest. You have followed the rules and produced a fine, rhyming poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Linda :)
Comment from barkingdog
Your contest entry has lovely art and colorful presentation.
It's difficult to say much about only eight words.
The rhyme is good in your declarative statement.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Your contest entry has lovely art and colorful presentation.
It's difficult to say much about only eight words.
The rhyme is good in your declarative statement.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you barking dog :)