"The Gift of Life Two."
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Broken Tis My Little Angel'"A book of beautiful poetry about life.
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Comment from Jacob Collins
I thought you captured the pain well in this piece and I am sorry for your loss, I can imagine that this must've been quite difficult to write. I thought that you wrote the piece well and used vivid detail, I couldn't find anything to critique. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I thought you captured the pain well in this piece and I am sorry for your loss, I can imagine that this must've been quite difficult to write. I thought that you wrote the piece well and used vivid detail, I couldn't find anything to critique. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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A three minute write.
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed it. I think you have strong words here. I loved the first stanza. Very powerful with a strong last line. Just a note this is posted as a story.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I enjoyed it. I think you have strong words here. I loved the first stanza. Very powerful with a strong last line. Just a note this is posted as a story.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks for that Michael.
Ricky 1024.