July's joys
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Comment from krys123
Zanya;
-I like your short essay on the release of summer in the beginning of autumn. Your essay was very full of dramatic imagery is it was distinctly expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout your writing and in a most colorful way.
-I like the picture of your zinnias in the or burnt orange look to them. It definitely gives the seasonal value of autumn as it replenishes the feeling of your writing very well. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Zanya;
-I like your short essay on the release of summer in the beginning of autumn. Your essay was very full of dramatic imagery is it was distinctly expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout your writing and in a most colorful way.
-I like the picture of your zinnias in the or burnt orange look to them. It definitely gives the seasonal value of autumn as it replenishes the feeling of your writing very well. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the critique zanya
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent descriptive story
Nature sings in your words
You have used the senses well
so the reader can see the beauty of July,
feel the touch of the chilly wind
hear the swish of the grasses
and smell the scent of the flowers
Excellent picture to match the poem.
Well done.
Enjoy the Camino in Spain
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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This is an excellent descriptive story
Nature sings in your words
You have used the senses well
so the reader can see the beauty of July,
feel the touch of the chilly wind
hear the swish of the grasses
and smell the scent of the flowers
Excellent picture to match the poem.
Well done.
Enjoy the Camino in Spain
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for reading zanya
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant tribute to July and a compelling easy read dear zanya! I love the metaphors you use and the description of your journey.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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This is a brilliant tribute to July and a compelling easy read dear zanya! I love the metaphors you use and the description of your journey.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the accolade zanya