Ossity and Tude
Free verse on words15 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
I'm going to have to fan you again. To think that I missed this while it still paid! This would be great for an English class. Love the definitions. My favorites:
Animosity: is the dark relentless thief of peace
That ravages the living soul of spiteful minds
GRATITUDE... Give it a hearty workout everyday of your life!!
Hugs,
Shari
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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I'm going to have to fan you again. To think that I missed this while it still paid! This would be great for an English class. Love the definitions. My favorites:
Animosity: is the dark relentless thief of peace
That ravages the living soul of spiteful minds
GRATITUDE... Give it a hearty workout everyday of your life!!
Hugs,
Shari
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Bless you dear friend...I've been away and missed your uplifting spirit and writings! Thanks so much for this lovely review and all the best wishes and HUGS Vance
Comment from jmdg1954
I kept avoiding to read this simply from the title. I wasn't sure what I would find. But I decided to give it a whirl and am glad that I did. This was extremely well written. Great choice of words and detail.
Your final word "gratitude" I can totally agree with and with your assessment. Nicely done, John
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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I kept avoiding to read this simply from the title. I wasn't sure what I would find. But I decided to give it a whirl and am glad that I did. This was extremely well written. Great choice of words and detail.
Your final word "gratitude" I can totally agree with and with your assessment. Nicely done, John
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Thank you John and glad to meet you ... I'm honored! Vance
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is awesome! When I saw the title I was intrigued because osity and tude sounded strange to me. My curiOSITY made me read it and now I'm filled with GratiTUDE. Thank you so much for sharing these wonderful thoughts.
I agree with you so much on this:
GRATITUDE: is the winner of all things good, wise, healthy, honorable, and holy,
Great job on this!
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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This is awesome! When I saw the title I was intrigued because osity and tude sounded strange to me. My curiOSITY made me read it and now I'm filled with GratiTUDE. Thank you so much for sharing these wonderful thoughts.
I agree with you so much on this:
GRATITUDE: is the winner of all things good, wise, healthy, honorable, and holy,
Great job on this!
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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I am totally delighted to know that I was able to offer something of positive meaning to you and I'm so glad to meet you Ana and hope you will come around often. I shall come visit you as well! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Cass Carlton
This poem is a wonder of composition, as well as holding a gem of wisdom within
it. Try as I might, my skills do not allow me to do anything like this. My "light goes on " and it's all stream of consciousness from then until completion. Your poem has so much in it, defining the human traits you have chosen so well.
Yes, Gratitude is the Prime Mover of Human response . If we stop to give thanks for the blessings we enjoy, how different the world would be . Well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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This poem is a wonder of composition, as well as holding a gem of wisdom within
it. Try as I might, my skills do not allow me to do anything like this. My "light goes on " and it's all stream of consciousness from then until completion. Your poem has so much in it, defining the human traits you have chosen so well.
Yes, Gratitude is the Prime Mover of Human response . If we stop to give thanks for the blessings we enjoy, how different the world would be . Well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much .. and so sincerely!!! your lovely comments have really encouraged me and inspired me to keep pursuing my goal of promoting GRATITUDE. You have certainly made my gratitude SHINE TODAY. and thanks so much for the very inspiring six stars. Please don't be a stranger, and I will also come visit! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Vance
Good way to explain the meanings of the necessary of men and women to show our fellow peers by Osity and Tude.....
discussing us how to live in a better world.
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Hello Vance
Good way to explain the meanings of the necessary of men and women to show our fellow peers by Osity and Tude.....
discussing us how to live in a better world.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Wow Gert! Thanks so much for this wonderful review and spirit-lifting six stars!! My GRATITUDE is in full flight!! It is truly an honor to get such applause from such a STAR POET! AND WONDERFUL FRIEND! Blessings and Hugs. Vance
Comment from val fitchie
It's good to see in the first half of this essay the His Greyness trademark UNIQUE Descriptive metaphors that have no equal (I love it when the next sentence and the one after that keeps going with a description MOTIF-building upon the previous-and just when ya think there's no more metaphors on this planet, he adds more from GOD knows where) My one concern is merely my own neurosis (for I AM Intelligent and Aware enough to recognize I am reviewing a MASTER of this craft who is MORE Intelligent and Aware)-It is thus:"Hopeless, darkness-driven, blind, and cold consistency"....In my humble opinion, the root word "dark" was just very recently used before these words appeared-Also, "darknessdriven" and "blind" are unfortunately redundant. However, "darknessdriven" is SO picturesque (One can SEE a demon led carriage) I would probably go back to the first "dark" occurance: "dark relentless thief of peace" and omit the one word for the sentence there is already STRONG...........now, here is what the first sentence I mentioned would look like omitting the word "blind":"Hopeless, darkness-driven cold consistency" (I see that a couple of "bonuses" showed up by doing this! ("darkness-driven cold consistency" is an ALLITERATION MASTERPIECE that came from YOUR pen!)...........so, in conclusion, we once again have a Visionary who is simultaneously the FIRST and the LAST word
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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It's good to see in the first half of this essay the His Greyness trademark UNIQUE Descriptive metaphors that have no equal (I love it when the next sentence and the one after that keeps going with a description MOTIF-building upon the previous-and just when ya think there's no more metaphors on this planet, he adds more from GOD knows where) My one concern is merely my own neurosis (for I AM Intelligent and Aware enough to recognize I am reviewing a MASTER of this craft who is MORE Intelligent and Aware)-It is thus:"Hopeless, darkness-driven, blind, and cold consistency"....In my humble opinion, the root word "dark" was just very recently used before these words appeared-Also, "darknessdriven" and "blind" are unfortunately redundant. However, "darknessdriven" is SO picturesque (One can SEE a demon led carriage) I would probably go back to the first "dark" occurance: "dark relentless thief of peace" and omit the one word for the sentence there is already STRONG...........now, here is what the first sentence I mentioned would look like omitting the word "blind":"Hopeless, darkness-driven cold consistency" (I see that a couple of "bonuses" showed up by doing this! ("darkness-driven cold consistency" is an ALLITERATION MASTERPIECE that came from YOUR pen!)...........so, in conclusion, we once again have a Visionary who is simultaneously the FIRST and the LAST word
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Wow, how wonderful to hear from you and to receive this deeply expressive and (obviously deeply considered) review. It is always a true and genuine delight to hear from you and I cannot hope to adequately express my genuine appreciation for the time and thoughts you give to my work and my "coaching' with your outstanding and brilliant feedback! Stay close dear one! Vance
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Free verse on words
Ossity and Tude
by His Grayness
Hello His Grayness lol ... I agree with you, it is very important to be grateful for what we have. This poem style is not my favorite.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Free verse on words
Ossity and Tude
by His Grayness
Hello His Grayness lol ... I agree with you, it is very important to be grateful for what we have. This poem style is not my favorite.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the stars Gypsy and I've never done anything quite this uncommon before but wanted to capture attention leading to the endorsement of GRATITTUDE, which is my committed poetic mission. I really appreciate your five stars. Thank You! Vance
Comment from seaglass
This is complex and very well thought out. All these definitions and comparisons woven into a poem. I agree that Gratitude is very important to be a healthy, well rounded human being.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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This is complex and very well thought out. All these definitions and comparisons woven into a poem. I agree that Gratitude is very important to be a healthy, well rounded human being.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much seaglass for you lovely and uplifting review! It is always a delight to hear from you and share your works as well: Blessings! Vance
Comment from tbacha58
Servitude: is the mission of giving, caring, hoping, commitment and love to those
Who are needful, to those who may be lifted, and to those who deserved to be served
GRATITUDE: is the winner of all things good, wise, healthy, honorable, and holy, it is UTOPIA
It is the word that always wins in all things in life! Give it a hearty workout everyday of your life!!
Hi Vance, i so much enjoyed your doctrine, i read it and re read, it is so true, in each explanation i found out nothing but the truth.
Beautiful. I have been away for 8 months, due to some health problems, but i am trying to crawl back gradually. Hope u are feeling better morally. A friend from Montreal. Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Servitude: is the mission of giving, caring, hoping, commitment and love to those
Who are needful, to those who may be lifted, and to those who deserved to be served
GRATITUDE: is the winner of all things good, wise, healthy, honorable, and holy, it is UTOPIA
It is the word that always wins in all things in life! Give it a hearty workout everyday of your life!!
Hi Vance, i so much enjoyed your doctrine, i read it and re read, it is so true, in each explanation i found out nothing but the truth.
Beautiful. I have been away for 8 months, due to some health problems, but i am trying to crawl back gradually. Hope u are feeling better morally. A friend from Montreal. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Terry, for this very lovely and uplifting review. I'm honored to hear from you and you will be in my prayers for a rapid healing and I'm so glad to see you back! Hugs and blessings dear friend!! Vance
Comment from DALLAS01
Have you ever heard the term "An attitude of gratitude."
Attitude is the master of balance that guides the heart and mind
To choose what path the spirit shall follow and what faith shall prevail
I am an avid believer in Attitude being a choice.
Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Have you ever heard the term "An attitude of gratitude."
Attitude is the master of balance that guides the heart and mind
To choose what path the spirit shall follow and what faith shall prevail
I am an avid believer in Attitude being a choice.
Thanks for sharing these words of wisdom.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you Dallas01 and indeed, I very often use the wonderful encouragement of "Attitude of Gratitude" and I certainly thank you for your wonderful review. All the best: Hugs and Blessings! Vance
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You're welcome.