"The Gift of Life Two."
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I Mournd but Will MourneEvery Spring"A book of beautiful poetry about life.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I get your drift since I have been reading you for awhile now. You are just one exploding burst of pure loving emotion - but if you would fill in the gaps a bit better more folks would read and truly appreciate you. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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I get your drift since I have been reading you for awhile now. You are just one exploding burst of pure loving emotion - but if you would fill in the gaps a bit better more folks would read and truly appreciate you. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Explodiung burst of pure emotion?
Hmm, good name for a poem
ricky
Comment from mkflood
This illustration won the unexpected angles contest which was an unexpected surprise to me. This works well with or story and as always an honor to have my work included with yours..great job and thanks again..mkflood
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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This illustration won the unexpected angles contest which was an unexpected surprise to me. This works well with or story and as always an honor to have my work included with yours..great job and thanks again..mkflood
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Mel as I and you are writer's/Artists..
Uniquee
Richard Smrkovsky
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Ty
Comment from Wabigoon
Ricky--
You need to clue me in some more so I can "get" this. Cause I "don't." It seems heartfelt and maybe ultimately about organ donation? But you don't include enough here, unless, perhaps, I am to presume Christ is God's "organ donation" to get it.
Here are a couple of problems:
This Is book (too) of my 'Gift of life' series. Two
far (*)above." "
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Ricky--
You need to clue me in some more so I can "get" this. Cause I "don't." It seems heartfelt and maybe ultimately about organ donation? But you don't include enough here, unless, perhaps, I am to presume Christ is God's "organ donation" to get it.
Here are a couple of problems:
This Is book (too) of my 'Gift of life' series. Two
far (*)above." "
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 11-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Jason {my Son} passed away from a massive Brian injury and is an Organ-Tissue donor. .
Although unconscious, breathing, and alive His quality of life would have been miserable.
I posted about Christ and Easter but even Jesus never saved a soul as He died that day for our sins.
Ricky1024
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Ricky1024--
The information you add is terrible. I feel for you. You are right about Christ -- he never made that sort of sacrifice. My best wishes.
Wabigoon/Jeff
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Ricky1024--
The information you add is terrible. I feel for you. You are right about Christ -- he never made that sort of sacrifice. My best wishes.
Wabigoon/Jeff