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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from OklahomaDreamer
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Reminds me of a Psalm's verse. But it read very monotone and depressing. Knowing Christ bring a joyous continuance to each new day and that joy is missing from this piece. There are also some misspellings in the piece. I can see where you are going with it though. Good luck on your continued writing.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    I am sorry that I offended you. The poem to me is uplifting as I do believe in God. What words are spelled wrong? I did a spell check.

    Norm
reply by OklahomaDreamer on 10-Aug-2015
    No offense... Satan is spelled Satin in the poem.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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And how do they make peace for eternity? By doing what I always like to say "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary". Well written poem that clearly depicts what you have written about.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    By believing in God
Comment from Mary H-W
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Such a warm, reverent tribute to God. it feels honest and heart-felt.
Your words ring true to me, and I'm so glad to have read this piece.

I think you meant to say 'Satan'
And Satin takes

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015
    Thanks for the kind revue. I corrected the spelling.

    Norm