Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous,

~Children's laughter~is a very good essence poem about children's laughter, I think it is a sound we all love. Good job!

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thanks Gypsy Blue Rose for a lovely review Cheers

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. This is a delightful little verse which enhances the artwork beautifully. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Hi Mystic Angel. Thanks for your review and comments and best wishes. Enjoyed doing this one Cheers

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Better to hear them laughing than to hear them crying, or not making any noises at all. Well written poem that should also be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thank you Brett for your review and comments . Yes kids will be kids and laughter is much better than fighting lol Cheers

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Children's laughter gives a person a sense of wholeness and purity in the world. A world of innocence, love and joy.

I love to hear my grandchildren laugh. Nicely done... John

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thank you John . I do too and that is what come to mind for this poetry style . My grandchildren and I laugh a lot they keep me amused . Cheers for your time and comments

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, A truly wonderful message in so few words, Children'e laughter is indeed so uplifting, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thank you Eric when I read the contest rules for this style of poetry . I immediately thought this up, so I hoped it would convey my message and by your lovely review it has so a thanks again appreciate your time and review Cheers

reply by Eric1 on 11-Aug-2015

You are very welcome my friend.

reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015

Cheers Christine

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Maybe I am missing it but I don't see an internal rhyme, just an end rhyme. Your syllable count is correct. If you change it let me know and I will change the rating:)
teresa

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Hi Tab that's me thanks for your review but I thought laughter and after rhymed as the internal rhyme, maybe I'm wrong. Appreciate any help Cheers

reply by TAB_that's me on 09-Aug-2015

i missed that sorry. i changed the rating.

Comment from Dickleeshia

Excellent

A well thought out poem with specifically internal & ending rhymes in 6 syllables!
Apt photo!
Thanks for visiting my portfolio & choosing this photo!
Hope you can select more for your future works!

Dickson

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thank you Dickleeshia for your review and comments As soon as I saw you photo I thought that was the one to match my poem so thanks for having it available Cheers

reply by Dickleeshia on 13-Aug-2015

You're most welcome Chrissy!