Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Pretty."A sensory appreciation of nature.
11 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
What a gorgeous composition. The artwork is spectacular in its own right, but the Rictameter is a perfect choice to mimic the pattern of the flower and butterflies. Then the blended background and font take it to a higher level. The poetic imagery perfectly paints the portrait in words. This is a gem.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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What a gorgeous composition. The artwork is spectacular in its own right, but the Rictameter is a perfect choice to mimic the pattern of the flower and butterflies. Then the blended background and font take it to a higher level. The poetic imagery perfectly paints the portrait in words. This is a gem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much.
I appreciate your review rating and comments.
;-) Shirley
Comment from l.raven
HI Shirley, one of my favorite forms...I love your beautiful poem....and the picture and your colors are stunning...you should have put this one in a contest...very nicely written...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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HI Shirley, one of my favorite forms...I love your beautiful poem....and the picture and your colors are stunning...you should have put this one in a contest...very nicely written...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks Linda for a great review.
I don't feel in the league of competition writers so I don't bother anymore.
I appreciate your positive encouragement though.
:-) Shirley
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always so welcome...always...luff xoox
Comment from krys123
Shirley;
-you have made this writing an exceptional presentation with a superb picture and colorful lettering which creates a wonderful poem.
-Very good use of enjambment
-imagery that is exponentially expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-All in all a great presentation and a well written piece of poetry that I truly enjoyed and was very much entertained and thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Shirley;
-you have made this writing an exceptional presentation with a superb picture and colorful lettering which creates a wonderful poem.
-Very good use of enjambment
-imagery that is exponentially expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the writing.
-All in all a great presentation and a well written piece of poetry that I truly enjoyed and was very much entertained and thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you Alex.
As always I appreciate your support and detailed review.
A real confidence booster.
:-) Shirley
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You are so sincerely welcome my friend.
Alex
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You are so sincerely welcome Shirley.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Shirley...
_ Well, this is a breath of fresh air.
_ Love the beautiful artwork.
_ avmurray has such neat work posted.
_ You have a knack for these Rictameter poems.
_ Well composed and presented, my friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Hi, Shirley...
_ Well, this is a breath of fresh air.
_ Love the beautiful artwork.
_ avmurray has such neat work posted.
_ You have a knack for these Rictameter poems.
_ Well composed and presented, my friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks Jax.
I appreciate your supportive review.
I just love the artwork from avmurray-truly inspiring.
Thanks for the confidence boost.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Pretty.
by seken58
I like your poem about beautiful butterflies and how they drink nectar from flower to flower. It is amazing how you made such a structured format seem easy. It flows well. Good job!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Pretty.
by seken58
I like your poem about beautiful butterflies and how they drink nectar from flower to flower. It is amazing how you made such a structured format seem easy. It flows well. Good job!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much for a lovely review.
Your support is appreciated.
Try one-it may not be as hard as you think.
:-) Shirley
Comment from Dawn Munro
As I've grown older (okay, I'll say it - "aged" - yikes!) I seem to have turned into a simpering sack of tears! (LOL) But seriously, when something is especially beautiful, it brings tears to my eyes. Your poem did that, and you must have read my favourite colour is yellow (*smile*) because the artwork is stunning too.
...sigh...so gorgeous!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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As I've grown older (okay, I'll say it - "aged" - yikes!) I seem to have turned into a simpering sack of tears! (LOL) But seriously, when something is especially beautiful, it brings tears to my eyes. Your poem did that, and you must have read my favourite colour is yellow (*smile*) because the artwork is stunning too.
...sigh...so gorgeous!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks Dawn.
You have inspired me and also humbled me.
I truly appreciate your positive review and support.
:-) Shirley
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It was my distinct pleasure, Shirley. :)
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. The flowers are indeed beautiful. The bees and people alike are drawn to the. The bees are after nectar and humans are after seeds and perfume. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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This is yet another interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. The flowers are indeed beautiful. The bees and people alike are drawn to the. The bees are after nectar and humans are after seeds and perfume. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks Tomes.
I appreciate your supportive review.
I love the artwork by avmurray-truly inspiring.
:-0) Shirley
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My pleasure
Comment from rspoet
This is a beautifully written and presented Rictameter poem
The syllables are exact to the pattern
Excellent imagery,
beautiful descriptive writing that captures
the fragile feel of the butterfly
Perfect presentation with gorgeous photograph
that compliments the poem
framed in black background and butterfly yellow font
Very well done
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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This is a beautifully written and presented Rictameter poem
The syllables are exact to the pattern
Excellent imagery,
beautiful descriptive writing that captures
the fragile feel of the butterfly
Perfect presentation with gorgeous photograph
that compliments the poem
framed in black background and butterfly yellow font
Very well done
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you for a wonderful,and positive review.
Your support and encouragement are appreciated.
:-) Shirley
Comment from OklahomaDreamer
Not bad at all. I have never tried this type of poem, although the contest entries have allowed me to attempt others. Was this for one of the contests? I would suggest different formatting that is easier in the eyes to read. I do not know if the sites restrictions had anything to do with the way it appeared or if it was intended. The picture is nice, don't describe it though...verbally paint the picture and evoke how it makes you feel. Please keep writing. You have great potential!!!
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Not bad at all. I have never tried this type of poem, although the contest entries have allowed me to attempt others. Was this for one of the contests? I would suggest different formatting that is easier in the eyes to read. I do not know if the sites restrictions had anything to do with the way it appeared or if it was intended. The picture is nice, don't describe it though...verbally paint the picture and evoke how it makes you feel. Please keep writing. You have great potential!!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thanks for the review.
It is a Rictameter poem and true to form.
:-) Shirley
Comment from dmt1967
This is a beautiful poem my friend. I enjoyed reading it and the yellow writing really fitted the poem well. The picture and the background blended with the words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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This is a beautiful poem my friend. I enjoyed reading it and the yellow writing really fitted the poem well. The picture and the background blended with the words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and review.
:-) Shirley