2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "haiku ( in rain-soaked jungles )"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
12 total reviews
Comment from LeslieP5
Missed out on entering this contest but you picked my favorite animal and endangered species, the tiger. Your play 9on word s was a clever way to get the point across. Congratulations on the win;.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
Missed out on entering this contest but you picked my favorite animal and endangered species, the tiger. Your play 9on word s was a clever way to get the point across. Congratulations on the win;.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Thank you lestie :)
Comment from Jean Lutz
Grand play on words. Both sad and funny. Yet one day that tiger will have no teeth. Karma? Beautiful picture to compliment your words. I wish you well with the entry.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
Grand play on words. Both sad and funny. Yet one day that tiger will have no teeth. Karma? Beautiful picture to compliment your words. I wish you well with the entry.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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thank you Jean :)
Comment from mvbrooks
Great final line with the play-on-words. Good use of alteration "feasts the famished tiger" strong phrasing that adds to the image of the tiger as a strong hunter.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
Great final line with the play-on-words. Good use of alteration "feasts the famished tiger" strong phrasing that adds to the image of the tiger as a strong hunter.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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thank you mvbrooks :)
Comment from Pen of Fire
Special of the week - whatever is available. You did a great job on this one. The artwork you chose is perfect. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
Special of the week - whatever is available. You did a great job on this one. The artwork you chose is perfect. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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thank you pen of fire :)
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular Haiku competition, Brilliant words with a great play on the word weak, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend,
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular Haiku competition, Brilliant words with a great play on the word weak, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend,
Comment Written 24-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2015
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Thank you Eric, I appreciate it.
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You are welcome my friend.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Mystery writer: beautiful tiger photo being so proud and mighty. When they are hungry, man can be the meat. Man can also kill the tiger for medicine. Man vs tigers, which one is weak? Great entry. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
Mystery writer: beautiful tiger photo being so proud and mighty. When they are hungry, man can be the meat. Man can also kill the tiger for medicine. Man vs tigers, which one is weak? Great entry. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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thank you :)
Comment from Amy Greta
Excellent haiku! Everything is spot (or should I say stripe) on, from the majestic picture to the syllable count and concrete imagery to the satori line at the end. I love the feast - famished contrast and my favorite
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
Excellent haiku! Everything is spot (or should I say stripe) on, from the majestic picture to the syllable count and concrete imagery to the satori line at the end. I love the feast - famished contrast and my favorite
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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thank you Amy ;)
Comment from country ranch writer
the tigers always go for the weakest in the herds for it is easy pickings for them and a fast food item so to speak in the animal world.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
the tigers always go for the weakest in the herds for it is easy pickings for them and a fast food item so to speak in the animal world.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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thank you :)
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Comment from TAB_that's me
ah, nice play on the word 'weak' making it a really great satori. great haiku and I wish you well in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
ah, nice play on the word 'weak' making it a really great satori. great haiku and I wish you well in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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thank you teresa :)
Comment from Winslow
Dear writer,
Maybe the poachers tell the customers it is chicken. It probably tastes a lot like bald eagle if barbecued. It is very sad because there are so many endangered species. When will humans learn to be good stewards of the environment.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
Dear writer,
Maybe the poachers tell the customers it is chicken. It probably tastes a lot like bald eagle if barbecued. It is very sad because there are so many endangered species. When will humans learn to be good stewards of the environment.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 23-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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thank you winslow :)