Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a super presentation. I love how you matched the color scheme to the font and artwork and background. Good job on the syllable count.

I see no changes. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015

Thank you Jan, I appreciate your review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nice haiku. Spanish music can be lovely. The flamenco is a quite nice musical style, May your week be blessed and good luck in the contest. Patricia

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015

Thank you Patricia, I appreciate your excellent review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

With very few words you manage to transport the reader away to another place and state of mind with this clever 5-7-5 poem.

good luck in the competition

GMG

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015

Thank you graffmang, I really appreciate this excellent review, especially coming from you.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This meets all the criteria of the prompt as to form and syllable count. It is a lovely presentation. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015

Thank you Jeanie, I appreciate your review.

Comment from Julia.

Excellent

Interesting. Normally when I hear the word "flamenco", I think of dance not singing, so I like the originality of this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

thank you Julia, I appreciate your review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I've always wanted to learn Spanish dances. They look like fun. Great 5-7-5 poem. good luck in the contest.
~~teresa~~

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

thank you Teresa, I appreciate your review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I love the beauty and the majesty of the Spanish dance, the costumes are always phenomenal. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you Sweetwoodjax, I appreciate your review.

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Got my feet tapping give me three second it will stop, out of breath, writer has all items necessary for this mix, writer stating their interests in touching songs of love while under a dance, line structuring is key and holds writer intent

With Spanish music
I love to sing flamenco
Soulful songs of love

or

I love to sing with
Soulful Spanish music of love
flamenco songs

slight word arrangement creates intents or enhancement to that stated all under writer aims of intent

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you for the feedback and review :)

Comment from Amy Greta

Excellent

I thought, before I read the poem, that dancing was your love, specifically the flamenco. Then I read "sing" instead of dance, and understood, however I feel the two often go hand in hand. The use of the word "soulful" conveys how the singing is much more than a mere physical performance; it reaches into your heart and calls to your emotions. Beautiful!
~Amy

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you for the feedback and review :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good photo and presentation.
-Format is good.
-Poem is written well.
-Nice alliteration in lines two and three, appropriate for the flamenco music.
-The last line is a very good image.
-I never thought of singing flamenco as much as seeing the dance, whether on t.v. or in the movies. It is very stirring and an amazing dance.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you for the feedback and review :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Jun-2015

You are welcome.