Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day mate. Gypsy you are so good at this poetry caper. This one is a beauty and the notes and picture make a beautiful and complete package of positivity. Well done once again, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015

G'day mate, thank you Fez, I really appreciate your excellent review, your opinion means a lot to me.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Gypsy. What a beautiful Haiku this truly is:

This line alone: "butterflies guide my soul's steps" is true poetry as far as I am concerned. I love the flocks of Monarchs I have seen in my lifetime. Bob

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you Bob, I do appreciate your review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an excellent presentation and contest entry. The artwork is awesome. Good job with the syllable count. Good use of alliteration. I like your satori well.

Good job and best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you for the feedback and review :)

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

A Summer day's stroll, indeed that's a very lovely expressed Haiku poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you, I really appreciate your review.

reply by lakeport on 22-Jun-2015

you are welcome, Hugs! Lakeport.

Comment from pbroussard209

Excellent

This was a wonderful haiku's. I love butterflies, my neighbor who lives behind us has a butterfly garden and we get so many butterflies in our yard.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you, I really appreciate your review.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Gypsy,
I like your haiku about a summer's day stroll, with the butterflies guiding your soul steps. It speaks my language indeed. Excellent.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015

Thank you, I really appreciate your review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your haiku and vivid picture. (I believe the second line has only six syllables, but that is not consequential.) Here's to butterflies and change! -Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015

Thank you, I appreciate your review.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Gypsy Blue Rose, A lovely butterfly totem - good syllable count.

Of special note:

renewal rebirth
(The essence of the butterfly)

Wonderful artwork choice and overall presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015

Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

The butterfly symbolizes many things, and its seemingly erratic flight patterns show that the direct route may not offer the best way to the destination. I gather you will follow them.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015

Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Wow...stunning photograph
And good job with your haiku as well. Nice end rhymes and alliteration.
Author notes are interesting too.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015

Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it.