Comment from danpald

Excellent

The beauty of life is enhanced
When there is change to cast
That forms according to design
Not free to change to what is not

Evolution is true
Within the design
Not free to change
Just for the sake of change

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks again for the. Great poem, blessings, Roy.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This one put quite a large smile on my face.
I have heard similar things in the past, about the lunacy of religion or their deities.

Just a thought indeed. Nice one.
GMG

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks GMG, for this great review, wonderful comments and great rating,

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a cute little five-seven-five that confuses the purpose of Geneses as pointing to the faithful, the master and creator of all things, with the physiological and genetic wonders of creation.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks Bill, I'm a creationist, thanks for the delightful review.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a cute poem, mystery writer, I like the way you have found a way to meld together the evolutionists and the creationists. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Although I'm a creationist, thanks so much for the wonderful reviewSW.

reply by sweetwoodjax on 03-Jun-2015

I'm a creationist too. God;s the creator,

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Evolution and religion have a place to be. The pope doesn't deny evolution after all the facts are the facts which doesn't explain God. The only explanation available is faith. That's my take on it. Well done. Les

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks Les for the great review.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a spot on line and syllable count. The message is powerful in execution and packaging. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks Bob, for this great review, wonderful comments and great rating.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I like this entry, it is humorous but it is also very true. But the fact that it is a fun contest, I refrain from being serious.

well done, good luck in the contest. Mary


omipotent should spell omnipotent

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for the great review, Mary,

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

God created all things, including evolution. He lives and not a man that He should lie. Well said. Best to you in the contest. Hope you win it.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thanks bro, I'm really a creationist, just a bit of fun, although serious, thanks my friend.