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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Henry Blogg of Cromer"Poems about the coastline
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Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a fabulous masterpiece. I was hosting a Crown of heroic sonnets contests on FS for four years in a row, and can really appreciate this form, one of the most difficult in Poetry, when it is flawlessly done.
The plot, the imagery, the execution are all superb. You portray a heroic personality, and what a perfect form you found for that!
I have a great fondness for all nautical, so your dary seafaring voyage really appeased me.
I am awed and very, very much impressed by your craft. This offering could have won our contest had you been here a year ago.
Here is the link to my contest entry from the last contest, and there you could see the link for the contest. Frankly, it was the best in years. The quality of entries was superb.
http://classic.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=672770&userid=154806&tf=0
Again, congratulations on the fabulous achievement, my friend. I always believed that writing a crown if heroic sonnets elevates one's poetry to a next level.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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This is a fabulous masterpiece. I was hosting a Crown of heroic sonnets contests on FS for four years in a row, and can really appreciate this form, one of the most difficult in Poetry, when it is flawlessly done.
The plot, the imagery, the execution are all superb. You portray a heroic personality, and what a perfect form you found for that!
I have a great fondness for all nautical, so your dary seafaring voyage really appeased me.
I am awed and very, very much impressed by your craft. This offering could have won our contest had you been here a year ago.
Here is the link to my contest entry from the last contest, and there you could see the link for the contest. Frankly, it was the best in years. The quality of entries was superb.
http://classic.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=672770&userid=154806&tf=0
Again, congratulations on the fabulous achievement, my friend. I always believed that writing a crown if heroic sonnets elevates one's poetry to a next level.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for this fantastic review and of course for the six stars. This is really appreciated.
Comment from TPAC
I am not a good judge of most poem forms which include my own, but I will state of this work interesting story about this seaman coherent in its details taking reader through events and time, I found it interesting in structured style good story
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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I am not a good judge of most poem forms which include my own, but I will state of this work interesting story about this seaman coherent in its details taking reader through events and time, I found it interesting in structured style good story
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to read this and produce such a complimentary review.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi..wow, a crown of sonnets, I am in awe...I can't manage one...
and what a wonderful way to tell a story, like the Bards of old.
I must read this again just to savour it.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Hi..wow, a crown of sonnets, I am in awe...I can't manage one...
and what a wonderful way to tell a story, like the Bards of old.
I must read this again just to savour it.
padumachitta
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for this complimentary review. I am most grateful to you
Comment from Walu Feral
WOW MAN! You are amazing at this poetry caper mate. That is one of the all time greatest pieces of poetic art that I have ever had the good fortune to read. You are a star Sir. Whta a great and brave dude this guy was, he retired at 71yo, crikey!
This may or may not be a typo....
"ratlines used like a ladder by sailors ascendind(ascending)." (From your notes).
Well done and cheers, Fez
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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WOW MAN! You are amazing at this poetry caper mate. That is one of the all time greatest pieces of poetic art that I have ever had the good fortune to read. You are a star Sir. Whta a great and brave dude this guy was, he retired at 71yo, crikey!
This may or may not be a typo....
"ratlines used like a ladder by sailors ascendind(ascending)." (From your notes).
Well done and cheers, Fez
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thanks for pointing out the typo. I'll get that changed. He was a pretty amazing guy. Thanks for taking the time to wade through and review. I am most grateful.
Comment from CR Delport
I am terrified of water and are grateful for men and women like these that risk their own lives to save others. This is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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I am terrified of water and are grateful for men and women like these that risk their own lives to save others. This is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thank you for this encouraging review. I hope I didn't frighten you too much!
Comment from I am Cat
By and large this is an amazing feat.
I've read and re-read... and I will keep reading
through the years... most likely even after you are
frayed from the bottom of your soles. :)
I've so much noise around me at the moment, but wanted to make sure
that I have this well deserved SIX STAR RATING left for you.
You know that I adore EVERYTHING you've written, and this is no exception...
I would like to point out that (as I believe Gloria has already stated) "awards' and 'assured' do not, in any dialect or language, rhyme. (sorry) :(
:)
ok, my work here is done.
xoxxo
Puss
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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By and large this is an amazing feat.
I've read and re-read... and I will keep reading
through the years... most likely even after you are
frayed from the bottom of your soles. :)
I've so much noise around me at the moment, but wanted to make sure
that I have this well deserved SIX STAR RATING left for you.
You know that I adore EVERYTHING you've written, and this is no exception...
I would like to point out that (as I believe Gloria has already stated) "awards' and 'assured' do not, in any dialect or language, rhyme. (sorry) :(
:)
ok, my work here is done.
xoxxo
Puss
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
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Thank you for this amazing review and those wonderful six stars. Awards and assured are an approximate rhyme in my opinion when spoken nin a plummy English accent like what I have got! Any international site will have this problem. Tomato potato lets call the whole thing off! Seriously though I am glad the piece gave you pleasure.
Comment from c_lucas
"Mae West" was also the call of a ship or person in danger. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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"Mae West" was also the call of a ship or person in danger. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your complimentary review.
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You're welcome, P. Charlie
Comment from Delahay
I cannot imagine the bravery needed to go out in all kinds of weather conditions to rescue desperate people from sinking ships. And facing the heartbreak of failing to rescue all of them. A fitting tribute to a brave man and his crews.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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I cannot imagine the bravery needed to go out in all kinds of weather conditions to rescue desperate people from sinking ships. And facing the heartbreak of failing to rescue all of them. A fitting tribute to a brave man and his crews.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you for a great review and for the six stars that accompanied it. I am most grateful.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Pantygynt - this is a marathon of a story - seven poems in one. Very well told in consistent abab rhyme throughout. You tell of a very brave, yet modest man who worked long after retirement age at a job that some men would cringe at the thought of doing. A crown of heroic sonnets - heroic in more ways than one - I don't think these men employed in this dangerous job are fully recognised by the public. But Blogg was very well recognised for his work with all those impressive medals. You have told the story incredibly well - keeping the rhyme throughout in a long factual story is not easy - Bravo. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hi Pantygynt - this is a marathon of a story - seven poems in one. Very well told in consistent abab rhyme throughout. You tell of a very brave, yet modest man who worked long after retirement age at a job that some men would cringe at the thought of doing. A crown of heroic sonnets - heroic in more ways than one - I don't think these men employed in this dangerous job are fully recognised by the public. But Blogg was very well recognised for his work with all those impressive medals. You have told the story incredibly well - keeping the rhyme throughout in a long factual story is not easy - Bravo. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your great review and for the magic six as well. Gratitude doesn't begin to cover it.
Comment from pipersfancy
The Crown and Heroic Crown of Sonnets - both forms marvelous vehicles for the telling of epic tales... especially historical accounts. This is a monumental achievement, Sir! I've written 2, and each one took weeks to accomplish, so I understand the work, time and commitment required to finishing such a task.
Bravo! A rare gem of a piece! It is epic... and well told. I can 'hear' your voice in the telling, as well as the thrashing of the sea, and the desperate calls of the sailors praying to be saved.
If (by chance) you're working on another Crown... or perhaps have one hidden up your sleeve... you might consider hanging on to it for a bit - there is a Crown of Heroic Sonnets contest here on FS every year. Not sure when exactly - I think it's usually in early spring.
Warmest regards,
Christina
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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The Crown and Heroic Crown of Sonnets - both forms marvelous vehicles for the telling of epic tales... especially historical accounts. This is a monumental achievement, Sir! I've written 2, and each one took weeks to accomplish, so I understand the work, time and commitment required to finishing such a task.
Bravo! A rare gem of a piece! It is epic... and well told. I can 'hear' your voice in the telling, as well as the thrashing of the sea, and the desperate calls of the sailors praying to be saved.
If (by chance) you're working on another Crown... or perhaps have one hidden up your sleeve... you might consider hanging on to it for a bit - there is a Crown of Heroic Sonnets contest here on FS every year. Not sure when exactly - I think it's usually in early spring.
Warmest regards,
Christina
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you for this great review and the magic six stars. I have hear of this competition and will probably enter next years. Gratitude doesn't begin to cover it.