Animated Stills
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
A different kind of poem from you, Tom. I give this a hardy thumbs up and loved the mystical aspects. "Animated Stills"--perfectly named. I look forward to more of the same.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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A different kind of poem from you, Tom. I give this a hardy thumbs up and loved the mystical aspects. "Animated Stills"--perfectly named. I look forward to more of the same.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you . There will be more for sure.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Great rock. I too can see the face you are speaking of.
Many only see the obvious and don't look deep.
You did a great job at this write bringing the rock to life. Thank You for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Great rock. I too can see the face you are speaking of.
Many only see the obvious and don't look deep.
You did a great job at this write bringing the rock to life. Thank You for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie. It was a fun write.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Interesting notes. Poem well written and possesses an easy to follow story line. Descriptive language used well throughout this little tale too.
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Interesting notes. Poem well written and possesses an easy to follow story line. Descriptive language used well throughout this little tale too.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 25-May-2015
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Thank you Brett. A nice review.
Comment from GregoryCody
Man this good. Really good. You have so many great lines.
Beware! As there are secrets those stones keep.
That's my favorite. The alliteration is so strong.
Your imagery is captivating and your form, as always, appears Perfect!
FANTASTIC!
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Man this good. Really good. You have so many great lines.
Beware! As there are secrets those stones keep.
That's my favorite. The alliteration is so strong.
Your imagery is captivating and your form, as always, appears Perfect!
FANTASTIC!
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thank you Gregory. I appreciate the wonderful review. And award of stars.
Comment from Ginnygray
Treishel, you have provided me with an education today as I have reviewed your poem! The photo is quite the curiosity and I can see where you felt motivated to write! The eloquence of your writing is very impressive, but the knowledge and execution of the Spenserian sonnet certainly lifts this poem for recognition, I think! Great job, and applause for you!!
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Treishel, you have provided me with an education today as I have reviewed your poem! The photo is quite the curiosity and I can see where you felt motivated to write! The eloquence of your writing is very impressive, but the knowledge and execution of the Spenserian sonnet certainly lifts this poem for recognition, I think! Great job, and applause for you!!
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you very much Ginnygray. I appreciate you stopping by to review and leave you wonderful comments.
Comment from Veeb
Beautiful sonnet that compliments your photo very well. Rock climbing continues to be a fascination for many folks nowadays; not sure it's all that safe unless properly trained.
I was very interested in reading about the Spenserian sonnet - new to me - and, although I am not qualified to critique, I am very impressed by your work. This is very readable, has a great tempo, great use of vocabulary, and interesting.
Nicely done; lovely sonnet. I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Beautiful sonnet that compliments your photo very well. Rock climbing continues to be a fascination for many folks nowadays; not sure it's all that safe unless properly trained.
I was very interested in reading about the Spenserian sonnet - new to me - and, although I am not qualified to critique, I am very impressed by your work. This is very readable, has a great tempo, great use of vocabulary, and interesting.
Nicely done; lovely sonnet. I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Veeb. Its is a very eloquent format of the Sonnet that I like very much.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Enjoyed this poem very much. The rock is telling everyone to 'look at me with
my beauty' but you better 'respect me.'
It was an easy read and the pace was very good.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Enjoyed this poem very much. The rock is telling everyone to 'look at me with
my beauty' but you better 'respect me.'
It was an easy read and the pace was very good.
Thank you!
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Gunner.
Comment from rod007
You are right, that rock has eyes and a large mouth. It would make the ideal setting for a horror story--how about kids disappearing into it as they play on the rock. Great rhyming and flow. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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You are right, that rock has eyes and a large mouth. It would make the ideal setting for a horror story--how about kids disappearing into it as they play on the rock. Great rhyming and flow. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Rod. Indeed it would.
Comment from Nottoway
I really like the way you presented this poem about this rock outcropping. I too like looking at such presents of nature and wondering what story they could tell based on their centuries of watch.
Excellent
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I really like the way you presented this poem about this rock outcropping. I too like looking at such presents of nature and wondering what story they could tell based on their centuries of watch.
Excellent
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Nottoway. Sometines you find amazing things.
Comment from Pantygynt
It certainly is an eerie looking piece of rock with that ill-tempered looking face peering out. It is easy to see how it got its reputation. The Senserian sonnet is an interesting form and I think you have handled the main body of the poem brilliantly. I'm not quite so happy about the the final couplet. I seems somehow a little too flippant in the company of the earlier lines. Just a thought.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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It certainly is an eerie looking piece of rock with that ill-tempered looking face peering out. It is easy to see how it got its reputation. The Senserian sonnet is an interesting form and I think you have handled the main body of the poem brilliantly. I'm not quite so happy about the the final couplet. I seems somehow a little too flippant in the company of the earlier lines. Just a thought.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Hmm, you might have a point. I did intend to put the Spencerian volta there, but maybe i made the turn too strong.