A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Hold me close"Assorted poems of love
12 total reviews
Comment from petalangela
The piece follows all the rules the prompt requires it gives a message to reader that flows uninterrupted .
It is said that one night of love can give your strength to cope with a life time of hardships, if love was like this poem depicts then that is surely true
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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The piece follows all the rules the prompt requires it gives a message to reader that flows uninterrupted .
It is said that one night of love can give your strength to cope with a life time of hardships, if love was like this poem depicts then that is surely true
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank-you, Petalangela for this great review. As it was my first nonet I am very pleased that it followed all the rules. It's a real bonus for me that it touched you enough for a review.. :)
Always
Comment from Dean Kuch
A well written poem in true Nonet form, Mystery Poet.
It's a fact that when we love someone, we want to be with them as much as humanly possible. We don't want to be separated from them or want them to leave. We want to be near to them always, not just in proximity, but in their hearts as well.
Perfectly written, this should be a strong contender for top honors in the contest.
Best pf luck to you! ~Dean
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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A well written poem in true Nonet form, Mystery Poet.
It's a fact that when we love someone, we want to be with them as much as humanly possible. We don't want to be separated from them or want them to leave. We want to be near to them always, not just in proximity, but in their hearts as well.
Perfectly written, this should be a strong contender for top honors in the contest.
Best pf luck to you! ~Dean
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Your understanding of my work is very flattering Dean... Thank you indeed for such a beautiful review
Always
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My pleasure, Anonymous... :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, hold me close, ends up being a love poem that invites a relationship to go forward. That's nice. I had to make the graphic larger as it initially looked like a bullet hole.
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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This nonet, hold me close, ends up being a love poem that invites a relationship to go forward. That's nice. I had to make the graphic larger as it initially looked like a bullet hole.
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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HAHA... a bullet hole... Puts a whole new spin on the wording Bill.. :)
Thank you for the wonderful review.
Always
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
This is a difficult format to write in You have accomplished with short lines what others may need pages to do the same..Am not sure if punctuation on end of line is needed..But I have never written in this format so I may be wrong..Other wise, mystery writer, your emotions flowed like rapids in a stream !!! Good luck
tk
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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This is a difficult format to write in You have accomplished with short lines what others may need pages to do the same..Am not sure if punctuation on end of line is needed..But I have never written in this format so I may be wrong..Other wise, mystery writer, your emotions flowed like rapids in a stream !!! Good luck
tk
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you, TK for your wonderful review. I will look again at punctuation.
Always
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It held my attention from beginning to end. It flows well and you followed the contest rules. Your artwork choice is also nice.
Angel123
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It held my attention from beginning to end. It flows well and you followed the contest rules. Your artwork choice is also nice.
Angel123
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank you angel. Not only for the read but the review as well.
Comment from patcelaw
Very goo nonet, written perfectly and presented beautifully. May the rest of this week find blessings to overflowing. Patricia
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Very goo nonet, written perfectly and presented beautifully. May the rest of this week find blessings to overflowing. Patricia
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Patcelaw, thank you for spending some of your valuable time reading my work and for this lovely review
Always
Comment from rspoet
You have written a very strong Nonet poem for the contest
The syllables are spot on by my count
The poem has excellent flow which matches the visual structure
Beautiful presentation with excellent art work to poem match, nicely framed with black background and light for a font
A poem worth hanging onto as well as a love
Excellent
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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You have written a very strong Nonet poem for the contest
The syllables are spot on by my count
The poem has excellent flow which matches the visual structure
Beautiful presentation with excellent art work to poem match, nicely framed with black background and light for a font
A poem worth hanging onto as well as a love
Excellent
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Wow thanks, RS! Your review has brought a smile to my face :) Well, I at least have the poem to hold on to.
Always
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Beautiful nonet on the subject of love. Nice artwork chosen to accompany your writing. Good luck in the contest. Kind regards, Sarah.
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Beautiful nonet on the subject of love. Nice artwork chosen to accompany your writing. Good luck in the contest. Kind regards, Sarah.
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Sarah, thank you for such a delightful review. I have my fingers crossed..lol
Always
I will mozy on over and take a peek at some of your art!
Comment from RADH!KA
9,8,7...1 syllable count poem is difficult to create. You've written it beautifully.Your poem has a soothing dreamy effect while reading . Background image and font colour are icing on the cake
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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9,8,7...1 syllable count poem is difficult to create. You've written it beautifully.Your poem has a soothing dreamy effect while reading . Background image and font colour are icing on the cake
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Rad, thank you so much for such a kind review. I am a lil nervous as this is my first Nonet. :)
Thank you again :)
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If its your first attempt , then it is all the more impressive :) Good luck in the contest
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Thank you again :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your nonet poem has the perfect syllable and line count. Good love/romance poem. good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Your nonet poem has the perfect syllable and line count. Good love/romance poem. good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you so much Tab, I am a lil nervous :)
Always