Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, it seems the moon affects everyone in one way or the other...from romantic nights...to werewolves...I love your poem...and a beautiful picture...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-May-2015

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reply by the author on 19-May-2015

Thanks LInda.
Your constant support and thoughtful reviews are appreciated...always.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 19-May-2015

you are so welcome Shirley...xxoo

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

An excellent Minute poem that is well crafted and full of night sky imagery. The format is a good choice for this topic. Its pulses with the brilliance of the night canopy. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you so much for a great review.
I appreciate your support.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Shirley...

There's something neat about a dark sky with only the moon shining bright. Magical, sort of. Good minute poem.

I should venture into other formats. I might learn something! LOL

Off to do shopping... ugh....

How is your sister doing? Special prayer going out to her, your and yours. Take care, my friend.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks Jax.
I appreciate your review.
Definitely give it a go.
Until I joined Fanstory in 2013 I had a head full of ideas and no idea what to do with them.
My sister is still holding on but with multiple complications. Thanks for asking.
:-) Shirley

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

I know how difficult this format can be...To be able to write in it and still make some sense out of the words is a challenge. But you have succeeded in doing it to a T Good work..One thing the title and intro are almost impossible to read with the black on blue..I even cleaned my glasses and it didn't work..Could be my old age too Hate when that happens lol
tk

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks again.
I do enjoy writing and reading this style.
I'm not sure what I can do about the title and intro- it seems fine on my end.
I don't know how to change the colour there.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another interesting and beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I love looking up at the night sky. It is almost like a spiritual experience.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks Tomes. I appreciate your review.
The night sky is definitely beautiful and so inspiring.
:-) Shirley

reply by Tomes Johnston on 17-May-2015

It is indeed.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written a very fine minute poem
Syllable count is exact 8,4,4,4
Meter is spot on, and rhyme is excellent
The poem flows well from stanza to stanza
Excellent presentation with good photograph to poem match, framed in blue background with moonlight font
Well done

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you.
I appreciate your time and lovely review.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This minute poem, As Moonlight Shines, helps the reader envision the slightly cloudy full-moon evening in all its awesome glory. It fills the mind with wonder and possibilities, just as it must have done for the ancients, staring at it and pondering the unknown realms above.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thanks Bill.
I appreciate your thoughtful review.
I agree wholeheartedly with your views.
:-) Shirley