Act of Endurance
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Comment from papa55mike
When we do join our voices in a song of hope, fear has no choice but to leave. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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When we do join our voices in a song of hope, fear has no choice but to leave. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Yeah. You have a great day too. Your statement conveys to me a warm heart. Glad nothing in this particular read: angered you. Thanking you for that generous rate. And kind words
Comment from Ice Traigh
For the life of me, I could not figure out the rhythm to this poem. Maybe it's avantgarde. I think it's about a family of dancing, singing birds. Only reason I don't give this 2 stars is because I recognize some talent and intelligence going on here. Maybe I'm missing the point, or maybe the author tried a bit too hard to go artistic. Either way, something was missed.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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For the life of me, I could not figure out the rhythm to this poem. Maybe it's avantgarde. I think it's about a family of dancing, singing birds. Only reason I don't give this 2 stars is because I recognize some talent and intelligence going on here. Maybe I'm missing the point, or maybe the author tried a bit too hard to go artistic. Either way, something was missed.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024
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Another effort, that failed apparently. Maybe, soon get lucky and do it right: making a more appealing and comprehensive read for my reader. Again, thanking you for this generous rate despite.
Comment from writeapoem
God created animals for man. I enjoyed your expressions and professions how animals can be loved who gave them to man from above. All the best for loving God' creatures.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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God created animals for man. I enjoyed your expressions and professions how animals can be loved who gave them to man from above. All the best for loving God' creatures.
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Yeah, the little guys need a voice and friend. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed captivating statement.
Comment from artisart4u
I like your poem about how you have over the years got to know animal behavior.
I like how one line rolls into the next and most of all the start of each sentence
is explained in the stanza. Like "They give sight to blindness ..."
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I like your poem about how you have over the years got to know animal behavior.
I like how one line rolls into the next and most of all the start of each sentence
is explained in the stanza. Like "They give sight to blindness ..."
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Learnt features I obtained from FS reviews. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts about this write.
Comment from rashi kumar
I will tell you the one thing I loved the most about your poem- its music.
unto the utmost: high heaven, chorusing love. Shelter and my fortress, held of harmony, torn soul's rim... too many. Its not annotation/connotation everywhere, its word music. The way you have put together them in a sentence- loved it.
Pleasure to read, it is indeed a song
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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I will tell you the one thing I loved the most about your poem- its music.
unto the utmost: high heaven, chorusing love. Shelter and my fortress, held of harmony, torn soul's rim... too many. Its not annotation/connotation everywhere, its word music. The way you have put together them in a sentence- loved it.
Pleasure to read, it is indeed a song
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Wonderful feelings expressed about this write. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements of inspirations.
Comment from way2gokevs
A six for effort on a well constructed and flowing free verse poem.
Very in-depth showed a maturity of a life lived well and with a song.
Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
Cheers.
Kev.
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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A six for effort on a well constructed and flowing free verse poem.
Very in-depth showed a maturity of a life lived well and with a song.
Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
Cheers.
Kev.
Comment Written 23-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Love your comment, I find myself touched by the things not expressed: totally captivated by said thoughts. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Excellent story, great writing skills.You aroused my interest in the way you expressed yourself in this great piece of work .Great Job
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Excellent story, great writing skills.You aroused my interest in the way you expressed yourself in this great piece of work .Great Job
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Glad these thoughts were found pleasing to you. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Hi, again busy writer. Busy journeyer!
I feel this is an excellent opening:
Ideals presented in aims to have hope, them chorusing love, your songs of prayers; themes having dreams unto the utmost: high heavens.
Pitch kindness within my empty shell
And:
Planners of courses they are to be, a glow assured of achievement, I'm out of sadness; guidance has its brightness: its shine as sun.
Shelter and a fortress they are to me, them as pals to walk with me in life; I'm structured in knowledge: our views held of harmony.
A wonderful start for a new day! I hope the sun continues to warm and bless you as your journey unfolds new treasure on the Way. Happy travelling, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Hi, again busy writer. Busy journeyer!
I feel this is an excellent opening:
Ideals presented in aims to have hope, them chorusing love, your songs of prayers; themes having dreams unto the utmost: high heavens.
Pitch kindness within my empty shell
And:
Planners of courses they are to be, a glow assured of achievement, I'm out of sadness; guidance has its brightness: its shine as sun.
Shelter and a fortress they are to me, them as pals to walk with me in life; I'm structured in knowledge: our views held of harmony.
A wonderful start for a new day! I hope the sun continues to warm and bless you as your journey unfolds new treasure on the Way. Happy travelling, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 01-May-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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See some of my blindness has given some light. Appreciate your input, good, bad.or ugly: I try to accept my pits. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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Extra stars for such great work, especially if challenged with blindness, blessings, Maureen*&*
Comment from Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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a song was a very well written piece of artwork by 2Pac it causes and clauses no human being on Earth is rich in objective content as well as object of contents eBay imagery Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Glad this write caught some interests. Thanking you for generous rate and comforting thoughts.
Comment from foxangie123
I think you have won this contest with this amazing write and the art you chose to go with it. Wow this is third of yours today. You have gotten every number. Great stuff
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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I think you have won this contest with this amazing write and the art you chose to go with it. Wow this is third of yours today. You have gotten every number. Great stuff
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Exactly, stuff. Hope to few them from flows, FS has given me a good start. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements.
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If you need anything I'm here as is FS. Keep being great.