The Gift of Life!' III.
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Comment from stephybs
This is a very well written piece with graphic details of how life really can be. So many die from drugs and get hooked so easily. You have told of such deep harrowing sadness. There's a couple of words missing in your writing that you may want to check "fang" himself a girl. Instead of found, and region should be rehab. Excellent descriptive work. Stephybs
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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This is a very well written piece with graphic details of how life really can be. So many die from drugs and get hooked so easily. You have told of such deep harrowing sadness. There's a couple of words missing in your writing that you may want to check "fang" himself a girl. Instead of found, and region should be rehab. Excellent descriptive work. Stephybs
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks stephybs for the review and bringing attention to the grammar{which I have corrected}.
I also spelled brain Brian the Killer's name!
Ricky1024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is an emotional read. The dialogue is real and there is no holding back. Your writing is strong and raw and makes for a very interesting read. Terrific!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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This is an emotional read. The dialogue is real and there is no holding back. Your writing is strong and raw and makes for a very interesting read. Terrific!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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"As traumatic as these two examples are Sir Michael...
'Sadie was a necessary relief from a much greater issue....
"Life in a tortured STATE!!!!
"Thanks again my friend and I feel sorry for Loren and Lilly to have to have experienced that terrible night!"
Ricky1024......