LIfe's journey
Beginning to end.8 total reviews
Comment from mjac777
This was a really good write, mystery author, given the confines of the contest. Yes, we all ponder death as we approach old age.
I think it makes us more aware of how we are living life each day.
All rules followed - I find no fault.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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This was a really good write, mystery author, given the confines of the contest. Yes, we all ponder death as we approach old age.
I think it makes us more aware of how we are living life each day.
All rules followed - I find no fault.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you mjac for the awesome review and stars, I came in second in this contest, my best thus far. God Bless!
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Wow! Congrats! Well done. The voting can go any way on any given day - you never know who's going to vote.
So 2 nd is awesome.
Comment from Judy Couch
You made a clear and easily understood statement of fact. The end of life is death. It completes the journey. You met the requirements of the prompt well. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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You made a clear and easily understood statement of fact. The end of life is death. It completes the journey. You met the requirements of the prompt well. Good job.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Judy for the awesome review and stars. I love fanstory, I am new to the site and have been welcomed with the warmest of welcomes.
Comment from tbacha58
Complete
journey of life
is death
For me this is the one I would chose as a winner. So down to earth, a story of a life time, is expressed by this writer. Bravo. Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Complete
journey of life
is death
For me this is the one I would chose as a winner. So down to earth, a story of a life time, is expressed by this writer. Bravo. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Terry, thank you so much for your most excellent review and stars. God Bless!
Comment from Acquired Taste
Wicked good - scary artwork presentation is a terrific showcase for your words. My best wishes for luck in this contest. AT=/
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Wicked good - scary artwork presentation is a terrific showcase for your words. My best wishes for luck in this contest. AT=/
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Acquired Taste, I do love the dark side of life at times but I was hoping to convey death's sensitive side with the baby in hand. God Bless!
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Oh yes, it is in the eye of the beholder - and sensitive (?) yes - he wasn't holding the baby's heart - that was a good thing! Jean
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 2/4/2 syllable count for this contest
good use of enjambment to make this one continuous statement
an interesting observation about the nature of life and death
Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Your poem is in good 2/4/2 syllable count for this contest
good use of enjambment to make this one continuous statement
an interesting observation about the nature of life and death
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Brooke, I enjoy writing to the fullest capacity and only wish I had taken it more serious when I was younger. I would love nothing more than to write for living. Thank you again and God Bless!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You have met the contest requirements well with a spot on syllable count. The message is quite powerful given the syllables allotted. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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You have met the contest requirements well with a spot on syllable count. The message is quite powerful given the syllables allotted. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Mystic for the awesome review and stars, I hope to be improving on these prompts. They certainly push my creative level to an all new high! God Bless!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This meets the contest criteria as to syllable count, 2-4-2, and it makes a true statement. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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This meets the contest criteria as to syllable count, 2-4-2, and it makes a true statement. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Jeanie for the awesome review and stars, my goal is constant growth and I hope this will bring me to the level I wish to be. God Bless!
Comment from JM
Yes, we all think about reaching the full circle. That's why we must not waste a single day so that we can truly have a
complete life. I also like your most unique illustration.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Yes, we all think about reaching the full circle. That's why we must not waste a single day so that we can truly have a
complete life. I also like your most unique illustration.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you for you awesome review and stars, trying to show a softer side of death in the pic. God Bless!