Comment from
honeytree
The art work is great for these words.
I guess when we are young we tend to make friends
such as a boyfriend or girlfriend this is life
within our lives we learn to love one another.
honey tree
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
Comment from
sibhus
ide? something missing here?
An interesting poem, that descibes the anticipation of young desire so well. Sadly as all often happens our hero is shot don in flames. Great piece of writing.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014