Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet has the proper set up and relives the terrible story that a woman may have been put through. This horrible ordeal would be doubled if the rapist were released.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Very true, Bill, more could be done to help the victims. Thanks for the review.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent and dramatic presentation, Mary.

You're right - it's a horrible crime, and your words expertly express that. Top last line!

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

This is such a great presentation from most importantly, the message it carries, and the beautiful silhouette artwork. It seems as if it should be on a poster for abuse - it's really good.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thank you so much for the encouraging review and great comments.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

yes they truly are....they us every excuse in the book...some serve time ...get out and do it again...it's so very sad...your poem is very well written...and has a true message...

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks your for the encouraging reviewl

reply by l.raven on 11-Aug-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Great nonet that you wrote for this poem. It has a powerful message. I like the way you formatted your poem. Great rhyme scheme. Great picture. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks for the great review and comments.

Comment from livelylinda

Good

Author: I don't know if my eyes are crossed or just tired or what, but I'm getting a strange syllable count in line 3 which has 8 syllables just like line 2. It should have seven. I've counted it and recounted it to make sure I was counting right: his - 1
abuse- 2
was - 1
rough- 1
and - 1
cruel- 2 = 8 syllables

The poem is powerful, a good one, but you must fix that syllable count if you have time. Good writing. livelylinda


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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

You are right, I have checked it, and it has 8 syllables instead of 7, I was counting cruel as 1 syllable, I have corrected it and I appreciate your spotting it.

Comment from JM

Exceptional

I think your poem should be posted in every school counselor's office. It should be posted in church bulletins...everywhere
Women can read it. You have a strong message. I read this and I was angered with "he was guilty but he was set free." Thank you.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

Thanks JM for the vote of confidence on my nonet, exposing a horrific crime, I appreciate you comments and exceptional rating.

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Good story told in just a few words. It is true that the perps too often get off without even a reprimand. Evidently "no" doesn't mean no.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thank you Judy for the great comments and the review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I don't recall your creating a nonet before, and I found it a good vehicle for your theme. I admired your addition of rhymes and your potent, final three lines. Well done- Joan

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

Thanks you Joan for a great review,

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

This is an excellent sample of a nonetheless poem you did great job telling a heartwrenching tale within so few syllables. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2014

thanks for the great review