Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Words in Plait"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
5 total reviews
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the blitz poem prompt. I love how your poem turned out. Great flow. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the blitz poem prompt. I love how your poem turned out. Great flow. Best of luck.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2014
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Thanks! :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Misrael
Oh honestly that was something else and it sounds fun but also very confusing to me. Maybe someday I will get the hang of it but not right now. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Oh honestly that was something else and it sounds fun but also very confusing to me. Maybe someday I will get the hang of it but not right now. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Misrael. And now I'd better return to my regularly scheduled "programme." :) As much as I like poetry, I know I need to focus on my longer projects!
Comment from TOMORAL
Wow, this is a new one on me! I had trouble keeping up and understanding the trip, but it is well written according to the rules, and for that I give you a five.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Wow, this is a new one on me! I had trouble keeping up and understanding the trip, but it is well written according to the rules, and for that I give you a five.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Yes, I can't say it's my favorite poetry to read. But it was a fun way to grease my writing wheels. Thanks for reviewing, TOMORAL. I know you probably have a lot to read of others' work.
Comment from Pyrrho
This 'blitz' poem competition has resulted in rather banal responses and they are tedious to read ... so I speed read them and comment on the 'feel' they impart.
If sped read, it flows well and the impression of excellent idea-enjambment (if I can use that as good idea-transmission-segues from line to line).
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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This 'blitz' poem competition has resulted in rather banal responses and they are tedious to read ... so I speed read them and comment on the 'feel' they impart.
If sped read, it flows well and the impression of excellent idea-enjambment (if I can use that as good idea-transmission-segues from line to line).
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Pyrrho. It is not one of my better poems. The constrictions of the form are so odd. I think it was more revealing to myself about my bizarre psyche, than it would be a poem for others to enjoy. I must confess, after seeing what I wrote, I feel I might need to check myself into a unit. ASAP.
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In addition, I chose an inappropriate title. I am supposed to take the first word of the third line and the first word of the forty-seventh line, in that specific order. I changed it just now. Okay, I'm done with this poetry form! :)
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Comment from costellsgirl33
OMG! I have never read a poem like this in my life! I was like what in the world is going on? Then i read the notes and I was like oh okay, now I get it, lol!
I had to read some lines over and then I understood.
Very nice job and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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OMG! I have never read a poem like this in my life! I was like what in the world is going on? Then i read the notes and I was like oh okay, now I get it, lol!
I had to read some lines over and then I understood.
Very nice job and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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LOL! Thank you. It was fun. I was inspired to give it a try because I saw Barb did one. (And I said the same thing to myself: "What in the heck?") You might want to try it!
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You are very welcome! And lol! You did a good job. I think i'll pass on trying one of my own, I have a hard time writing a three line poem, lol
Arnetta