Cardinal's Song
Contest entry - Nonet20 total reviews
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This is fantastic. I love Cardinals. I once had one hit a window, so I picked him up until he woke up all wobbly and flew off INSIDE. I had to chase the rascal out with a broom. It was so funny. I even got to pet him. He was zonked out, stone cold. Hope you're okay. I am missing you, Ms. Angel. Take care.
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This is fantastic. I love Cardinals. I once had one hit a window, so I picked him up until he woke up all wobbly and flew off INSIDE. I had to chase the rascal out with a broom. It was so funny. I even got to pet him. He was zonked out, stone cold. Hope you're okay. I am missing you, Ms. Angel. Take care.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from jonmichael
Angel, I feel so left out. I have had any messages from you and I am lost (hint of a smile please). I like this poem because I can see the steps taken in my own life in the words. It also helps that my favorite bird is the Cardinal so you have me. I like the way that the patience of the bird and the patience in the poem becomes a strength. The final line "I" shows that power where beauty has the ability to affect without movement. A great theme to expand on.
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Angel, I feel so left out. I have had any messages from you and I am lost (hint of a smile please). I like this poem because I can see the steps taken in my own life in the words. It also helps that my favorite bird is the Cardinal so you have me. I like the way that the patience of the bird and the patience in the poem becomes a strength. The final line "I" shows that power where beauty has the ability to affect without movement. A great theme to expand on.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your well chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the serenity the cardinal brings as it sings from the tree
good visual
good alliteration in
serenely, sitting, shade
sweetly, sings
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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good luck in the contest
your well chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the serenity the cardinal brings as it sings from the tree
good visual
good alliteration in
serenely, sitting, shade
sweetly, sings
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you!
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most welcome ..SC >.Faye
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet seems to have it all together with correct syllable count and an additional rhyme scheme included. It kind of comes to thud at the end with the non sequitur "I".
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This nonet seems to have it all together with correct syllable count and an additional rhyme scheme included. It kind of comes to thud at the end with the non sequitur "I".
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from BlueFlag
very good poem
I never knew there were this many kinds of poems
So very unique in there own way!
worthy of my 5 star review
good luck
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very good poem
I never knew there were this many kinds of poems
So very unique in there own way!
worthy of my 5 star review
good luck
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A poem that advertize itself by an imposing art photo. I love the sweet alluring words you seamed together to achieve this fine nonet.
ola thomas
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A poem that advertize itself by an imposing art photo. I love the sweet alluring words you seamed together to achieve this fine nonet.
ola thomas
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Nosha17
Bravo, a nonet that rhymes! It was so much nicer and showed you put effort into an attractive poem to compliment the beautiful bird you were writing about. Lovely description of the bird. Lovely pic, too. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. faye
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Bravo, a nonet that rhymes! It was so much nicer and showed you put effort into an attractive poem to compliment the beautiful bird you were writing about. Lovely description of the bird. Lovely pic, too. Enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. faye
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from poetbear
Great artwork.
Reads and flows well.
Makes sense.
Your words parallel and compliment that photo.
Beautifully written.
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Great artwork.
Reads and flows well.
Makes sense.
Your words parallel and compliment that photo.
Beautifully written.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author or Cardinal's Song. You have written a lovely poem for the contest entry. The bird is beautiful, but way tooooo large. He's frightening!! Ha. Carole
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To the author or Cardinal's Song. You have written a lovely poem for the contest entry. The bird is beautiful, but way tooooo large. He's frightening!! Ha. Carole
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with your nonet poem. I feel that your poem flowed really nicely from start to finish. Best of luck.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with your nonet poem. I feel that your poem flowed really nicely from start to finish. Best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you!