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Acrostic & 5-7-5 Combo - just for fun.

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Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Mystic Angel 7777: Well written of the word of love. I think that I have to write down my thoughts or in the am I forget. I have paper and pen by my bed.

We do thirst for knowledge and the word of life. Terrific WORD message. Congrats on the award!
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much! I use a digital recorder which goes everywhere with me and rests on my night stand when I go to sleep. You never know when inspiration will come and a great writer once said you never have to correct anything you wake up in the middle of the night thinking about. I am very grateful for your lovely words of encouragement and support.
Comment from adewpearl
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Solid acrostic for Word
excellent use of personification
nice touches of alliteration
I like the closing rhyme
thoughtful reflections on the nature of the written word
Brooke

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, Brooke! I am thrilled that you liked this and very grateful for your wonderful words of encouragement.
Comment from Ridley Williams
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Hi MA,
I appreciated your thought of connecting with your passion in the unveiling of the day. Loved your alliterative phrases and the "S" consonant that flows throughout the verse's descriptive wording, well done. Beautiful expression and presentation. Best wishes, Bill

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much, Bill! I am so happy that you enjoyed this and always grateful for the kind words of encouragement to keep trying new and different things.
Comment from Sasha
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I really like this 5-7-5 acrostic combo...maybe you have started something new. Excellent work with this. I enjoyed it very much. I am the opposite of you...my clearest thoughts come late at night and keep me awake until I have written them down. I look forward to seeing more creative work like this one.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! I get the downloads during the night and follow through in the morning - after meditating, Inspiration is quite the amazing thing when it hits you like a brick. HUGS!
Comment from Ben Colder
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Yes they do poet. Early morning before the day begins cramming its way into your mind. I must try this type sometimes. Well done. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! A special time of day when the things sent to us through the night are clearest. Hugs & blessings for the kind words of encouragement.
Comment from wiljacro
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HI! This is a very clever combo. and works extremely well, it could take off as a basis for a series of Word Prompts. Your mind is like a Bee Hive, buzz, buzz, buzzing all the time with new ideas. Very difficult to keep up with you! wiljacro.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from boxergirl
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Word! Great combination of acrostic and 5/7/5 format. The artwork is splendid as well. Early morning is a beautiful time but I don't get to enjoy it as much since I've retired. lol

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Oh so true. My novels come to me in the night and don't stop until I get them written down. Your poem flows nicely and the form fits the meaning.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
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I love the depth of your muse in this short work. Deep thoughts of the indethness and effectiveness of Word, spoken or written.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from Laurie's Legacy
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this was so clever, first using the word, then using a 5-7-5 stand for each letter and then of course, there is the lovely message each of your verses convey... Lovely picture and I really think you should put a book together, if you already have not and share your talent with the world.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
    Again, I thank you so very much for the encouragement and support.
reply by Laurie's Legacy on 10-Jul-2014
    you are so very welcome! And I'm serious about the book? You already have one out?