Comment from sunao

Excellent

Awww.... this is beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing. I am glad that you and your spouse were perfect for each other. It is so amazing to have a person who complements and completes you. Please keep up the good work and have an amazing day!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017

Hey sweet Sis thanks for the lovely review. I hope you heard the tune as well. Seeing I added another verse I need to update the music for that, and I also want to add a harmony if the file is not too big for FS. Some have said it needs more verses, might do that as well.

reply by sunao on 10-Jun-2017

What tune? Let me see if I can find the tune.

reply by sunao on 10-Jun-2017

Oh, I have just heard the tune. It is lovely!

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I love this. I bet she loved it when you wrote it for her. Maybe, if you wrote it some time ago, you can slip it to her as you leave one day or when as a special gift. A reminder of what she means to you. I'm glad you found her and I hope she's home soon and heals fast.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Thanks she saw this a while ago. Might add some more verses. Hope you heard the music. I have to add another verse and try some harmony if it doesn't make the file too big for FS. Thanks for the lovely review.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I wanted to rate this with six stars but fresh out. FS seems to be stingy with them. LOL. Good one Sankey. Good looking woman, but who is the dude with the derby? LOL.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Hey Bro, I know how it is when ya wanna SIX something and they have run out. I think they come up every week, hehe. Appreciate the thought, mate. Working on extra music (hope you heard that??) for more verses and a harmony if FS allows it (the file doesn't become too big)

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

It is so nice to finally see her. She is really a beauty. I thought that I recognized you in the picture but was not sure. It is a great picture and a great poem to go with it. Wonderful, Awesome job.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

Hi Sis I hoped you heard the tune as well. I gave to add another verse in music I also want to add harmony if it doesn't make the file too big on FS . I am also being encouraged to write more verses and that won't be hard. Check the link to the MP3

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

:D Love this....so sweet, but only one thing wrong with it...it's too short! :) You could add at least two stanzas to make it even better. Just an idea. Lovely and I bet your wife loves it too.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017

Thanks will work on it, hope you liked the music will add more verses and bring the music up to them AND if file not tobog for here, add harmony, as well. Thanks friend.

reply by Realist101 on 08-Jun-2017

Okay! It's wonderful as is, but just seemed to stop too soon! :-)

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017

No I agree, just hope if I add more and the extra harmony old Tom won't restrict it. Thanks again.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Sankey, I love the picture of you and your wife. It's lovely. I hope she will get better soon. I listen to the music with your lovely poem/lyric, and enjoyed. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017

Thanks Ulla, I need to add to the music for the extra verses I added recently, and I do plan to add harmony, as long as the file is not too big for FS. Thanks again.

Comment from Cmelton

Exceptional

Such an awesome picture. I went and looked at your picture again and it definitely is you. Great poem and wonderful rhyming scheme. Keep posting and I will keep reading.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thanks mate I hope you Clicked on the Link and heard the tune I wrote. I have to re-do it for the extra verse I put on today. I used to call this picture my Great Grandparents but it is us a year after we married in 1988(married 1987)

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

I truly hope Louise is improving...And your poem, I do like with some appropriate
piano music rendition...with a good photo appearing to be so authentic...looking like a couple from olden times, with or before the turn of the last Century,...Really, fancy. decorative costumes and quite the accessories, of hats, a laced fan, and looks to be a large, possible, cameo necklace adorning your wife's neck.

Thanks for posting, She's The Only One For Me...Caressa-08

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Hi Sis it was a dress up old outfit we got done at AUnstraliana Village in 1988, a year after we married. I called them my Great Grandparents. The third verse only got added today I have to re-do the music for the extra verse...but then I might add more! HEHE! Thanks for the lovely review You have to click on the link at the top for the tune. If you haven't already.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Very stylish outfits. With those grins the two of you are wearing, it looks your planning some Snakey Pankey. I hope yu have fun.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Haha it was only a year after married, so you are probably not wrong. I only added the third verse this morning, hope you liked the tune. I was calling them my Great Grandparents.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Sankey, when I first read this I didn't realize they were song lyrics but once i put the backing tune to it it took on a whole new perspective. It is a fun song about your sweetheart and a great photo to boot. Thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks Doc, I only added verse three this morning Wed AM Downunder. I need to re do the music to add another verse and maybe add harmony if the file is not too large for FS, thanks for coming back. Much appreciate your kind remarks