Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

love the guy's name
great description of Axel with good sensory appeal
good use of rhyming couplets
fun humor
nice touches of alliteration with phrases like smoke cigars
definitely a nonsense poem that made me laugh :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2014

Thank you, Brooke, for taking a look at this. Bill

Comment from Kingsland

Exceptional

This is an outstanding piece of poetic art. I smile the whole way while reading it. The cadence of this poem is dead on and it is a rather easy poem to read as well. This was humorous and very creative at the same time... John

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014

Thank you, John, for the tremendous review. Bill

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Brilliantly humourous poem entry, I'll bet everyone knows someone like Axel Basil Clyde de-coy, an excellent use of rhyme and the words flow really well.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014

Thank you, Eric, for the excellent review.

Comment from Kausar_Javeria

Excellent

Hello there~
Lol, this was a humorous read. I really loved the name of the boy though. Kinda catchy. Anyway, Good Luck in the contest and God Bless~!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014

Thank you, KJ, for the excellent review.

Comment from Raphael Montonaro

Excellent

Nonsense> This was good! Good form and good content and very good rhyme Keep writing lie this you seem to be a master at it!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014

Thank you, Raphael, for the excellent review.

Comment from freepass

Excellent

Wow, well it was funny!
And very good!
Good luck in the contest, first one I read for this contest!
Very good worth 5 Very big stars*****
So good luck!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

At first, I thought this was a person because of the name, then later I thought, No! Maybe it's an animal because of him being put in a cage. Actually, I don't know, but it's still a great little story-poem. A fun read. Great job! Les

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Les, for giving this a look. It' just a nonsense poem.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This is a both funny and nonsense poem. Don't know how you thought of such a name. He sounds more like a chimp than a boy - 'His frame is dense with body hair - And body odour twice his share' ugh! Sounds disgusting! Well written and a good read. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Dorothy, for the fun review.

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Be sure to come and see this boy Axel Basil Clyde DeCloy ... Enjoyable read I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Rouskin, for the excellent review.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Very clever and well written with good rhyme and meter. Love his name! And that he throws poo and smokes cigars. This is really imaginative! Could be the winner. :)

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014

Thank you, Phyllis, for the excellent review.