Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the poem. Wake up when nature does. Nature starts out with promises of hope. Feel the breezes starting out the new day. Listen to the happy songs of the birds. Get rid of the lingering doubts of the day before. Great work.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

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Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your six words paint a beautiful picture of the morning rising to the tune of birds singing in the breeze

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thank you

reply by Smoothiecool on 21-May-2014

welcome...SC

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is excellent. I like the picture that you painted in my mind. I enjoyed reading your poem and it flows well. Best wishes!

angel123

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Well done. You have chosen your six words nicely. They express the pictorial scene nicely. This describes the cool morning breezes very well.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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Comment from surrender

Excellent

A poem just in six words, but full of imagery. It appeals to many senses - birds sing (ears), morning breeze (skin), nature awakens (eyes). Of course it appeals to the heart as well. Very well written.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a beautiful image of Nature quietly awakening with a breath of 'Morning breeze' followed by the Nature's symphony orchestra 'birds sing'.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thank you