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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those games are fun, but I think this psychologist chose his subjects and words very carefully. I guess they both got what they wanted in the end. Great work, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
Those games are fun, but I think this psychologist chose his subjects and words very carefully. I guess they both got what they wanted in the end. Great work, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is hilarious Bill!! Thanks for giving me my only laugh for the day!!.........................................
Teresa
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
This is hilarious Bill!! Thanks for giving me my only laugh for the day!!.........................................
Teresa
Comment Written 11-May-2014
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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Thank you, Teresa, for the great review.
Comment from MIKECON
Fascinating piece with a storyline that is fun.Loved the ending "my place or yours"speaks volumes for the piece.
Enjoyed reading and wish you well in the contest
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
Fascinating piece with a storyline that is fun.Loved the ending "my place or yours"speaks volumes for the piece.
Enjoyed reading and wish you well in the contest
Comment Written 11-May-2014
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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Thank you, Mike, for the excellent review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - what a terrific flash of fiction. It held my interest from the get go and I absolutely loved the ending. You really used those necessary words very creatively. Lou
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
LOL - what a terrific flash of fiction. It held my interest from the get go and I absolutely loved the ending. You really used those necessary words very creatively. Lou
Comment Written 10-May-2014
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Thank you, Louise, for the excellent review.
Comment from Zue65
Ha ha, the psychologist is gay, is that the twist? Am I right in my interpretation of your 150 word story. The plot through a dialogue is a clever vehicle to introduce the characters, the setting and the twist to make one full story to a smooth finish. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
Ha ha, the psychologist is gay, is that the twist? Am I right in my interpretation of your 150 word story. The plot through a dialogue is a clever vehicle to introduce the characters, the setting and the twist to make one full story to a smooth finish. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 10-May-2014
reply by the author on 10-May-2014
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Thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Word Association. You have a weird sense of humor, but it's a laughable entry for the contest. Good luck. carole
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
To the author of Word Association. You have a weird sense of humor, but it's a laughable entry for the contest. Good luck. carole
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Thank you, Carole, for the excellent review.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. The patient may not have been cured. But he found a partner in the doctor. There are some things that probably should not cured, like homosexuality. Society is too busy trying to get too many people to change. Great work.
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
I love the picture. I love the poem. The patient may not have been cured. But he found a partner in the doctor. There are some things that probably should not cured, like homosexuality. Society is too busy trying to get too many people to change. Great work.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Thank you, nelliesellie, for the excellent review.
Comment from Janie King
Oh dear...now I sure wasn't expecting that twist of events. No denying you met the prompt requirements. good luck. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
Oh dear...now I sure wasn't expecting that twist of events. No denying you met the prompt requirements. good luck. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Janie, for the excellent review.
Comment from Jackarrie
you have written a very clever story incorporating all the prompt words. You also managed to score,
Well done,
good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
you have written a very clever story incorporating all the prompt words. You also managed to score,
Well done,
good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you, Mary, for the excellent review.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have included all the words in the contest
your interesting story between the psychologist and his patient was interesting with a twist with the word therapy
kept one engaged till end
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
good luck in the contest
you have included all the words in the contest
your interesting story between the psychologist and his patient was interesting with a twist with the word therapy
kept one engaged till end
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you, SC, for the excellent review.
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most welcome...SC