Odiferous ode
Ode 5-7-5 entry14 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Odiferous ode
Owed to an excess of beans
O dog - was it you?
Ha ha - oh, dear -- mind, he doesn't look like he cares a jot - lovely picture.
thanks for making me smile.
Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Odiferous ode
Owed to an excess of beans
O dog - was it you?
Ha ha - oh, dear -- mind, he doesn't look like he cares a jot - lovely picture.
thanks for making me smile.
Margaret
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from adewpearl
great illustration
for your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good use of alliteration and assonance
fun appeal to the senses
good humor :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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great illustration
for your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good use of alliteration and assonance
fun appeal to the senses
good humor :-) Brooke
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from seaglass
If it wasn't the dog, we can still surely blame him. lol This 5-7-5 poem was a fun response to the prompt. I once had a dog who could clear the room. The picture is adorable.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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If it wasn't the dog, we can still surely blame him. lol This 5-7-5 poem was a fun response to the prompt. I once had a dog who could clear the room. The picture is adorable.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
Poor puppy gets blamed for everything LOL Very cute picture and thank you for sharing it brought a chuckle to make my day complete. Terrie PS good luck in contest
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Poor puppy gets blamed for everything LOL Very cute picture and thank you for sharing it brought a chuckle to make my day complete. Terrie PS good luck in contest
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from Ben Colder
Nope it came in a can. Pew Wee, beans, beans , good for your heart, the more you eat them the more you like them. Good job Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Nope it came in a can. Pew Wee, beans, beans , good for your heart, the more you eat them the more you like them. Good job Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I have been there done that. Blame the bad smell on the dog. He can not defend himself. This dog looks sad. I think people will forgive him pretty quickly. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I have been there done that. Blame the bad smell on the dog. He can not defend himself. This dog looks sad. I think people will forgive him pretty quickly. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a creative approach to the ode 5-7-5 prompt. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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This is a creative approach to the ode 5-7-5 prompt. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from Debra White
LOL! The dog did it for sure - he won't make eye contact, that makes him guilty in my book! Very funny 5-7-5 ode. I enjoyed the alliteration and the humour. Good luck in the booth. Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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LOL! The dog did it for sure - he won't make eye contact, that makes him guilty in my book! Very funny 5-7-5 ode. I enjoyed the alliteration and the humour. Good luck in the booth. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
Comment from mfowler
You have made your pooch the object of your ode, and in turn scorned it for doing what comes naturally. Beans indeed. What's apooch doing gorging on excesses of beans? We all know that in teh wrong stomach, such foods give off worse than normal smells that offend sensitive noses. Your amusing ode in 5-7-5 is an interesting and amusing addition to the lineup of entries. I like the roundness of this piece, aided by your proensity for using O alliteratively; like a hill of little round beans.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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You have made your pooch the object of your ode, and in turn scorned it for doing what comes naturally. Beans indeed. What's apooch doing gorging on excesses of beans? We all know that in teh wrong stomach, such foods give off worse than normal smells that offend sensitive noses. Your amusing ode in 5-7-5 is an interesting and amusing addition to the lineup of entries. I like the roundness of this piece, aided by your proensity for using O alliteratively; like a hill of little round beans.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!
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Fancy the odoriferous ode being yours. A chAnge of direction from sonnets and such.
Comment from manicblue
Ha! This is the funniest I've read for this contest. The font size is a tad big, but it adhered to the 5/7/5 requirements...was the "ode" to the dog? lol Poor baby. :)
mb xx
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Ha! This is the funniest I've read for this contest. The font size is a tad big, but it adhered to the 5/7/5 requirements...was the "ode" to the dog? lol Poor baby. :)
mb xx
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Many thanks for reviewing my odiferous ode!