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ice at the equator

5 7 5 personification

15 total reviews 
Comment from MacMhuirich
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This was a wonderful poem. The artwork chosen is perfect and the colours are stunning. The imagery your words provoke is brilliant. thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
    Wow, this is an old one. I remember the prompt. Personify a place or thing, but do not reveal. This was Kilimanjaro and readers were trying to figure out african plain and ice....being the snow on kili. Thanks John for the review, cheers
Comment from Jean Lutz
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Magnificent composition. A soul set free has no limits. Doesn't use a lot of hype to express it -- simple words take it to new heights.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the wonderful review, I'm flying, I'm flying
Comment from LoannaLois
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Simply and beautifully written...this illustration is stunning...how did you ever find this appropriate piece?."ermine wrap ice queen" nice

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    thanks for the review
Comment from Carrie Carson
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This is striking, I can see her at her perch above it all.

No spag, good form, consistent format, I envy that!

Great job on the personification and you're right, that is a perfect image for this. :) Carrie


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the great review
reply by Carrie Carson on 14-Mar-2014
    Certainly, you're welcome. And Welcome to Fanstory, too! :) Carrie
Comment from Righteous Riter
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aloof she surveys
the African plains below
ermine wrap ice queen
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is correct. Good alliteration with she surveys. Clear message that is short and simple.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the review, it is Kili
Comment from queenv
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Beautiful picture. What would happen to make ice at the equator. A contrast of hot and cold. A great mental image. I love the picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the review. it is Kili
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello author, a great personification. Very good imagery and format. I especially liked:

ermine wrap ice queen

(Yes, indeed. Very Good.)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer



 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the review, it is Kili
Comment from TAB_that's me
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this is great poetic personification for the prompt. I like the simplicity of it in a 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
    thanks for the review, it is Kili
Comment from Aplgwest
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Lovely picture and image that the poem conveys. I think it very well meets the writing prompt criteria of personification of a place.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the review. it's Kili
Comment from Lysa Schuler
Exceptional
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This was an excellent poem. The picture you chose was perfect and the color coordination was ideal. They aided the poem's captivating flow. The accuracy of the words and meter captured my attention with just a few lines. It says alot. Good writ

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
    Thanks for the review. It's Kili