Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Wow Dean, an alliterated piece that captures the mind pretty quickly. Congratulations for your win on this contest guy. It's awesome.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thank you very much, Gungalo. I'm very happy you liked this one, and I'm very grateful for the congratulations. I appreciate it, my friend.

reply by Gungalo on 02-Mar-2014

Smile Dean.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

I can see why you won the contest. Congratulations! One long piece of alliteration in 3/5/3. Very clever. The picture almost 'swept' me away. I sat looking at it longer than I usually do with any other entry. It's mesmerizing - Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thanks, Dorothy. NatureGirl deserves all of the credit for the awesome picture. It is truly terrifying, isn't it?

I appreciate the outstanding review.

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

What an awesome piece of writing with all those 'w's ' beautifully orchestrated and an equally awesome 'live' nature photo - mesmerising and scary !

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thanks very much, zanya. Mother Nature's wrath, in all her horrific glory.

I appreciate the wonderful review.

Comment from jandeck

Exceptional

Obviously a man with skills. I love the complementary animation. It goes so well with your air 3-5-3. By the way , the poem is awesome, also!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thank you very much, jandeck. I really appreciate the awesome review!

Comment from MagKing

Exceptional

I really don't know how to comment and review this piece.
Is it the picture you used, which goes along with the title?
Or is it the style you conceived, and ended up so beautiful?
I see this as an alliterated poem
Beautifully done!
Congratulations!

MagKing

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thank you very much, MagKing. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, my friend!

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

An extraordinary poem that is masterfully enhanced by an extraordinary nature photo. You definitely deserved to win. Congratulations and best wishes.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks very much, Victor. I have to give all of the credit for that amazing photo to my friend, NatureGirl. She was kind enough to allow me to use it. The words were mine, though (LOL).

Thanks again!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Congratulations on this well-deserved win! It's hard to imagine after all the horrendous weather there could be more, but you vividly portrayed something worse. Your one hundred percent alliteration of "w's" adds to the intensity. Well done! -Joan

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, Joan. I truly appreciate the kind comments.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Wow,wow, wow, I love the alliteration....from title to all the way through the verse....I hear the wind in the w sounds...from windswept wrath....to weaving woe....and whoa what a picture
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Hey, thanks, kiwijenny, I'm so glad that you picked up on that. That "whistling" sound that a twister makes is exactly my reasoning for writing it the way I did, with all of the "W" words.

Thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate it!

Comment from Debbie7

Excellent

This fulfills the 3-5-3 writing prompt. Excellent alliteration throughout the piece with w sounds. Perfect picture to compliment it. Best of luck in the contest.
Namaste, Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks so much for the fabulous review, and for sharing your opinions with me on this one, Debbie. I'm very grateful.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

I like the realistic look of this poem. It is a well written alliterative piece. The 3/5/3 format is done to perfection and the descriptive metaphors are original. Great job!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thanks so much, RYME4U. Coming from you, that means a lot, my friend!