Comment from Nichola

Excellent

This seems to be about two people who were once close, now breaking apart. Your words express the numbness that one feels after a hard break up. Well written.

Nichola

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thank you, much appreciated. Haven't been on here lately, a lot going on...but thank you for reading and the review :)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Truly about a person who gains and introspective about love in their life and how that affected them in a relationship that was one-sided. Your rhymes were neither forced, labored or strained while you rhythm flowed very smoothly which made it easy for me to read your poem correctly. Thank you for posting and sharing this for everyone and may you have a good one always.
Alex

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you so much krys123, your words are always kind :)

reply by krys123 on 27-Feb-2014

You are so welcome I enjoyed the poem very much

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming with way/stay...untrue/you...unkind/unblind. Good word description that allow me to feel the disappointment and the hurt. Good eye catching photo followed by a message filled with sad truth.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for your thoughtful words :)

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Excellent artwork strong emotions and clear message:To learn of life the hard way But I'll walk away unblind
Thank you for sharing and have a great week

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for reading and you also!!

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Hi friend. I was so glad to have my Heavenly Father to bring Louise into my life. I did have a time when a lady won my heart but she did turn out to be a fake and only wanted to get me committed to be a Dad for a child she carried that most definitely was not mine. Sorry for raving. God Bless.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you for your sharing your story with me, I also believe that when one door closes, another opens. No apology necessary, so glad things worked out for the best for you...take care

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This poem has a simple beauty. The rhyme is consistent and the meter even allowing the reader to easily slip through the lines. It conveys the message of a disappointed lover who is taking control of her life and leaving a toxic relationship. Which is the only way to survive such a relationship.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you for your understanding words and kind review :)

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

straight way poetry. Right to the point. Good wording and nice rhythm. I find no fault. The stanzas sing like a song. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you Ben Colder for your kind review! Take care

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Beautiful art work you've chose for this wonderful piece. I loved the rhyming. And the rhythm was consistent and easy flowing. Great job.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Thank you amahra for your wonderful review!!

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Feeling betrayed by a relationship is hard. Yet, its a useful learning process for when you do get it right. Very emotional. Thanks for sharing. Les

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014

Yes, we do live and hopefully learn...thank you for your wonderful review :)