Early February Winds
A 5-7-5 about a change in the weather3 total reviews
Comment from Lynette Marie
A perfect 5-7-5 format. In so few words, you have captured the waning of winter into the hope of spring. I can't wait for the warm air to reach us. "Sunlight strikes ice sheets" -- excellent imagery.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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A perfect 5-7-5 format. In so few words, you have captured the waning of winter into the hope of spring. I can't wait for the warm air to reach us. "Sunlight strikes ice sheets" -- excellent imagery.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from seaglass
This 5-7-5 poem clearly describes February. Following the "forever lasting" month of January and her frigid cold, the shorter month of February promises a coming change.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This 5-7-5 poem clearly describes February. Following the "forever lasting" month of January and her frigid cold, the shorter month of February promises a coming change.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your review.
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Most welcome
Comment from zanya
A celebration of the approaching , increasing warmth of 'Early February Winds'and a final alliterative line of hope as sunlight does its work
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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A celebration of the approaching , increasing warmth of 'Early February Winds'and a final alliterative line of hope as sunlight does its work
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your review.