Animated Stills
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Snow Monsters"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
8 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Glad I read your author notes. It does look like a snowy pterydactal. Nothing wrong in letting your imagination run away. Good, frigid free verse.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
  |
Glad I read your author notes. It does look like a snowy pterydactal. Nothing wrong in letting your imagination run away. Good, frigid free verse.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
-
Thank you ravenblack. Like the alliteration - frigid free verse. Very cool.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
It does look like a bird or maybe since I'm in FL it looks kind of like an alligator. =} As always very well done and a fun read, though I doubt anyone who has to repair a roof or just get the snow off would think it fun at all. Rox
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
|
It does look like a bird or maybe since I'm in FL it looks kind of like an alligator. =} As always very well done and a fun read, though I doubt anyone who has to repair a roof or just get the snow off would think it fun at all. Rox
Comment Written 26-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
-
Thank you Rox, that actually is my roof. Yes it is very alligator like. I see that too.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
No I think maybe your creative side has just had a growth spurt. Lol.
Very creative and good use of imagination and description to tell a fine tale.
It's a little hard for me to imagine this scene for I have never seen or experienced snow.
I'm swelting under an Aussie summer.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
|
No I think maybe your creative side has just had a growth spurt. Lol.
Very creative and good use of imagination and description to tell a fine tale.
It's a little hard for me to imagine this scene for I have never seen or experienced snow.
I'm swelting under an Aussie summer.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
-
Thank you Shirley.. It is an experience when first encountered. Snow is beautiful.
Comment from Joan E.
You have a vivid imagination, but I do see the monster--what long teeth he has! Your free verse certainly is a fine example of an "animated still". Enjoy the remaining hours of this special day- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
|
You have a vivid imagination, but I do see the monster--what long teeth he has! Your free verse certainly is a fine example of an "animated still". Enjoy the remaining hours of this special day- Joan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
-
Thank you Joan. Good night.
Comment from rod007
i believe my imagination has run away with with these sharp icy teeth. Except in my case I don't want the teeth to bite my head off. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
|
i believe my imagination has run away with with these sharp icy teeth. Except in my case I don't want the teeth to bite my head off. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
-
Thank you rod. Me neither!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
There are plenty of ice monsters at my house. I enjoy your poems because they are often of nature, and your setting is similar to mine. Your subject matter resonates with me! You have a good imagination. Something I admire. Merry Christmas, Tom.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
|
There are plenty of ice monsters at my house. I enjoy your poems because they are often of nature, and your setting is similar to mine. Your subject matter resonates with me! You have a good imagination. Something I admire. Merry Christmas, Tom.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
-
Thank you, and Merry Christmas.
Comment from angelface2
Your imagination may have run amuck, but all in all I can see where you COULD come up with this. Except for the small remorseless eyes. Where did you find them? HMMM?
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
 |
Your imagination may have run amuck, but all in all I can see where you COULD come up with this. Except for the small remorseless eyes. Where did you find them? HMMM?
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
-
Thanks angeklace2. Just above the beak.
-
Ah. I missed that completely. Sorry
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
Snow Monsters is an excellent free verse poem with good flow
excellent, unconventional innovative structure. It has excellent figurative language and imagery.
Preston
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
|
Hi, Treischel,
Snow Monsters is an excellent free verse poem with good flow
excellent, unconventional innovative structure. It has excellent figurative language and imagery.
Preston
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
-
Thank you Preston.