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20 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this Annie...fall is my favorite time ...I love the crisp blue of skies and the beauty of the trees that glow against the sky...I love your contentment....fire place coffee....so great
God bless
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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I love this Annie...fall is my favorite time ...I love the crisp blue of skies and the beauty of the trees that glow against the sky...I love your contentment....fire place coffee....so great
God bless
Comment Written 07-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughtfulness...
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo fits this piece perfectly as the words bring the photo to life. Good word description that creates a clear imaginary in my mind. Good story telling. Strong beginning followed up by a stronger ending. Good work.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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The photo fits this piece perfectly as the words bring the photo to life. Good word description that creates a clear imaginary in my mind. Good story telling. Strong beginning followed up by a stronger ending. Good work.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem, Take care
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A very nice three paragraphs. Some nice descriptive lines. Your last line there is a small typo 'ambers' should be 'embers' - a very nice relaxing read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2013
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A very nice three paragraphs. Some nice descriptive lines. Your last line there is a small typo 'ambers' should be 'embers' - a very nice relaxing read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2013
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Thank you...oops, lol....have a great weekend!! :)
Comment from rhonny
a nicely written poem that tells of a winter evening and the simple joys it can bring. i gave you a 4 because i found it hard to read with this layout.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013
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a nicely written poem that tells of a winter evening and the simple joys it can bring. i gave you a 4 because i found it hard to read with this layout.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much...have a great Friday..
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thanks (but it's sunday morn now...heh, hleh, heh..... :)
Comment from Jackarrie
What a joyful poem to read and to get the feel of a crisp cold winters day. Yet see the beauty all around. Then to enjoy the warmth of the fire with its embers burning. I wish I was sipping coffee with you and discussing writing.
I like the format of the writing across the page.
Well done Mary.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013
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What a joyful poem to read and to get the feel of a crisp cold winters day. Yet see the beauty all around. Then to enjoy the warmth of the fire with its embers burning. I wish I was sipping coffee with you and discussing writing.
I like the format of the writing across the page.
Well done Mary.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2013
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Thank you Mary, that is very kind of you, that does sound nice. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Alena Smith
wonderful way to describe the surroundings. I felt like I was thee on that walk, then came back and felt the warmth of he fire.
great poem
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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wonderful way to describe the surroundings. I felt like I was thee on that walk, then came back and felt the warmth of he fire.
great poem
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Thank you Alena for your kind review :)
Comment from Bobby Jo
This poem paints a perfect picture in my mind and head. It takes me right there. It helps that it is -10 degrees outside right now. As I sit here collecting my thoughts with a hot cup of coffee. Good Job
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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This poem paints a perfect picture in my mind and head. It takes me right there. It helps that it is -10 degrees outside right now. As I sit here collecting my thoughts with a hot cup of coffee. Good Job
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed this....-10 Brrrrr....now that's chilly, lol...thank you again!!
Comment from Jacq77
I really loved the way you expressed this. It made me feel as if I was enjoying the beautiful scenery alongside you. There is nothing like curling up by the fire after a long walk in the autumn chill, and I felt the cosiness of the scene you came home to. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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I really loved the way you expressed this. It made me feel as if I was enjoying the beautiful scenery alongside you. There is nothing like curling up by the fire after a long walk in the autumn chill, and I felt the cosiness of the scene you came home to. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your wonderfully kind words...
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Artfully done, I feel as if I've been on this lovely stroll with you! There's nothing like a cup of coffee by the glowing embers to warm your soul!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Artfully done, I feel as if I've been on this lovely stroll with you! There's nothing like a cup of coffee by the glowing embers to warm your soul!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the awesome review, very kind words..
Comment from watergirl
I can just imagine the peaceful evening staring at the fire contemplating the day's visions of autumn and forest, light and frost. You have done well here, it is lovely to read.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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I can just imagine the peaceful evening staring at the fire contemplating the day's visions of autumn and forest, light and frost. You have done well here, it is lovely to read.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much, I appreciate you kind words...