The Bounty Hunter
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6 total reviews
Comment from Silent1rose
Dressed in all black, leaning on his ever present, [though]not needed, cane, the being seemed to always be ready for a funeral.
Awesome chapter! I was all tense throughout this one. Penny is Jessie's daughter! Wow! Good write. Even though I know the bounty hunter has cheated death so many times, I still fear for him. LOL. ~ Rose
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Dressed in all black, leaning on his ever present, [though]not needed, cane, the being seemed to always be ready for a funeral.
Awesome chapter! I was all tense throughout this one. Penny is Jessie's daughter! Wow! Good write. Even though I know the bounty hunter has cheated death so many times, I still fear for him. LOL. ~ Rose
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Twilightspire
Excellent ending and Inlive how you brought it all full circle, with Penny being Jessie's daughter. Awesome! The battle scenes were done with flair and grace. The seduction of Jessie was imaginative and wonderfully written. I can't wait to read the Red Hood and will keep my fingers crossed for a return of Samuel. Excellent job, my friend.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Excellent ending and Inlive how you brought it all full circle, with Penny being Jessie's daughter. Awesome! The battle scenes were done with flair and grace. The seduction of Jessie was imaginative and wonderfully written. I can't wait to read the Red Hood and will keep my fingers crossed for a return of Samuel. Excellent job, my friend.
-T.J.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much.
Comment from pbroussard209
This was a wild ride. I loved every word of it. I was wondering what Red Penny had to do with the Bounty Hunter now I know. Looking forward to reading more. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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This was a wild ride. I loved every word of it. I was wondering what Red Penny had to do with the Bounty Hunter now I know. Looking forward to reading more. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much. It was a good ride. Thank you for continued support. Well, let's see what I can do in the Red Hood saga.
Comment from joneau2
A great fantasy adventure story. Interesting, it kept my attention from beginning to end. You spin quite a tale, and write very well. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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A great fantasy adventure story. Interesting, it kept my attention from beginning to end. You spin quite a tale, and write very well. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much
Comment from sumbody32point5
Man I want this whole story... or series of stories... using her sexuality to defeat the beast was great, and the creature was truly terrifying. Well done
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Man I want this whole story... or series of stories... using her sexuality to defeat the beast was great, and the creature was truly terrifying. Well done
Comment Written 23-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you. You liked the ending of this short book. I originally meant it to be six chapters, but somehow it ended up being ten.
I have started a new tale, based in the same universe as this one. a few of the character may make a cameo here and there.
I posted the first story it is in my portfolio, it's call "A Red Penny." She is Jessie's daughter. I would love to know what you think of it.
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Just read that one... pretty crazy the universe you made makes it really easy to jump right. The telekinesis thing is real cool... she gonna meet up with the bounty hunter?
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I think she may meet up with both the Hunter and Jessie a few chapter down.
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nice i'll be looking out for it
Comment from tbacha58
Come with me, and know my love.
Have delights from heaven above.
Oh, join with me, and know pleasure.
I will be your heavenly treasure.
Come to me and cease your fight.
Love with me throughout the night.
Take me as your loving mate.
Hurry my love, do not wait.
Sorry I cannot read long stories due to my sight, but that poem , I loved reading it, it touched my heart, your rhyming is amazing, and the poem is so warm, deep, what a writer. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Come with me, and know my love.
Have delights from heaven above.
Oh, join with me, and know pleasure.
I will be your heavenly treasure.
Come to me and cease your fight.
Love with me throughout the night.
Take me as your loving mate.
Hurry my love, do not wait.
Sorry I cannot read long stories due to my sight, but that poem , I loved reading it, it touched my heart, your rhyming is amazing, and the poem is so warm, deep, what a writer. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 23-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013
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Thank you, Terry.
