thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "The beauty of love"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from Liz Dunbee
This is a lovely poem, full of joy for all those you love. 'I even try to love my enemies to' I think the other o fell off in this sentence. This is sweet and very inspiring. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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This is a lovely poem, full of joy for all those you love. 'I even try to love my enemies to' I think the other o fell off in this sentence. This is sweet and very inspiring. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the review and correction blessings sandy.
Comment from ThePaperThief
Thank you for writing this piece, I really enjoyed it. I was in need of a good word, a reminder of His plan, just now. And here you are with a well written example of love. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thank you for writing this piece, I really enjoyed it. I was in need of a good word, a reminder of His plan, just now. And here you are with a well written example of love. Thanks again.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Your welcome, thank you for reading it and your review have a blessed day sandy
Comment from Maureen's Pen
You have penned a strong faith based poem for the love poem contest. Strong word choices for spirituality message.
Nicely penned and I wish you luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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You have penned a strong faith based poem for the love poem contest. Strong word choices for spirituality message.
Nicely penned and I wish you luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Good morning Maureen thank you for reading and your review of my poem,hope you have a blessed day sandy
Comment from goompa
A very beaautiful religious poem. You will want to change "to" to "too" in the fifth line of the first stanza. Spend as much time as you possibly can with the grandson; he'll be a teenage before you know it.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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A very beaautiful religious poem. You will want to change "to" to "too" in the fifth line of the first stanza. Spend as much time as you possibly can with the grandson; he'll be a teenage before you know it.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistake I did go in and correct it.As for spending time with my grandson It is hard to believe we just celebrated his first birthday,can't spend enough time with him, blessings sandy
Comment from ronnie k
Amen,your deplayed the meaning of christain our Father asks of us to love each other as He loves us, thank you for this poem of christain faith.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Amen,your deplayed the meaning of christain our Father asks of us to love each other as He loves us, thank you for this poem of christain faith.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Your welcome, and thank you for your review have a blessed day
Comment from country ranch writer
last sentence first paragraph should that be loves instead of just love?nicely put together and very well done congrats keep up the good work
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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last sentence first paragraph should that be loves instead of just love?nicely put together and very well done congrats keep up the good work
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thank you for your review and correction of my work I am glad when fellow writers point out my mistakes to help me to slow down and reread what I write,thanks have a bless day
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welcome
Comment from mermaids
I like how your first verse is about your love for your family and the second verse is about God's love. This is an inspirational and comforting poem to read. Excellent flow of words and lines.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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I like how your first verse is about your love for your family and the second verse is about God's love. This is an inspirational and comforting poem to read. Excellent flow of words and lines.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words have a bless day