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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Treischel,
This is a great poem and I wish I had a six for you. I have tried to pick a favorite phrase or line but I like them all.
For then,
With powerful perception
My pen will race upon the page.
Unfettered thought shall run with joy,
And I will write
It all.
However, the verse above is especially powerful and compelling. Well done, chey
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Hi Treischel,
This is a great poem and I wish I had a six for you. I have tried to pick a favorite phrase or line but I like them all.
For then,
With powerful perception
My pen will race upon the page.
Unfettered thought shall run with joy,
And I will write
It all.
However, the verse above is especially powerful and compelling. Well done, chey
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you Cheyenne. I like that one best too.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent free style poetry with some rhyme, excellent unconventional visual structure great figurative language and imagery and good flow. I am glad i read this one.
Preston
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is excellent free style poetry with some rhyme, excellent unconventional visual structure great figurative language and imagery and good flow. I am glad i read this one.
Preston
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you Preston, glad you liked it.
Comment from sunnilicious
That's a wonderful poem. It is lyrical and fun to read. Creative with good visual imagery. Motivational for yourself and others to write too. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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That's a wonderful poem. It is lyrical and fun to read. Creative with good visual imagery. Motivational for yourself and others to write too. Excellent work.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you sunilicious. That is very encouraging.
Comment from Selina Stambi
You will, Will ... Shakespeare, sir??
Tom, this is a little gem - I love the classical, Elizabethan-esque touch, particularly in the opening and closing stanzas and the free-floating incidental rhyme.
Here I am - finally free to sit at my desk guilt free! How I've missed FS.
Sonali
p.s. Our mutual friend, Gungalo, must be honoured by the reverence you pay her poetry, Tom. :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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You will, Will ... Shakespeare, sir??
Tom, this is a little gem - I love the classical, Elizabethan-esque touch, particularly in the opening and closing stanzas and the free-floating incidental rhyme.
Here I am - finally free to sit at my desk guilt free! How I've missed FS.
Sonali
p.s. Our mutual friend, Gungalo, must be honoured by the reverence you pay her poetry, Tom. :)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much Sonali. She always shows me new things. I love your style too.
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of enjambment to keep your thoughts flowing from line to line
I really really like your opening verse
good alliteration in seek to set
great pairing of muse is mute
excellent alliteration in powerful perception with other P words
a very thoughtful look at the creative poetic process
Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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excellent use of enjambment to keep your thoughts flowing from line to line
I really really like your opening verse
good alliteration in seek to set
great pairing of muse is mute
excellent alliteration in powerful perception with other P words
a very thoughtful look at the creative poetic process
Brooke
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Brooke.
Comment from 9999pool
Yes, and what shall we write today?
Just be observant on the things that goes on around us every day.
If one activity or event catches our attention, the muse will flow to the first two lines. The rest will come by themselves, smiles.
Write without inhibitions if possible and that's the greatest muse for us to be inspired in being able to set free our muse - if we tried to control it, the flow will stop and as we ponder longer, the muse will not restart due to inhibitions and non-passionate in what our thoughts tell us, smiles. let the muse control as we monitored what the pen writes, :)).
Great write and well penned about a possible writer's block somewhere in our minds.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Yes, and what shall we write today?
Just be observant on the things that goes on around us every day.
If one activity or event catches our attention, the muse will flow to the first two lines. The rest will come by themselves, smiles.
Write without inhibitions if possible and that's the greatest muse for us to be inspired in being able to set free our muse - if we tried to control it, the flow will stop and as we ponder longer, the muse will not restart due to inhibitions and non-passionate in what our thoughts tell us, smiles. let the muse control as we monitored what the pen writes, :)).
Great write and well penned about a possible writer's block somewhere in our minds.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thanks Ritchie. Fortunately I haven't experienced it yet.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your intensely thought-provoking poem vividly conveys the theme that we must have the proper stimuli at the right times to write our most moving poetry.
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Your intensely thought-provoking poem vividly conveys the theme that we must have the proper stimuli at the right times to write our most moving poetry.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Janice. So very true.
Comment from Sweetiepie22
How we all wait for that perfect moment of
inspiration, that allows us to express what's
in our soul. We've all been there.
Excellent write.
Karen
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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How we all wait for that perfect moment of
inspiration, that allows us to express what's
in our soul. We've all been there.
Excellent write.
Karen
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sweetiepie22. Yes we certainly have. I' sure many can relate. BTW, sweetiepie is what I often call my wife, who is also named Karen!
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Serendipity!
Comment from SteveY
And when you do, it will be very good I'm sure. I love your author notes too. They have me laughing. But still this poem is very well done my friend!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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And when you do, it will be very good I'm sure. I love your author notes too. They have me laughing. But still this poem is very well done my friend!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you SteveY.
Comment from Sueellen11
un fished utterance was a good write,,, as is your poem,, the very same issue,,, losing you muse for a period of time,,, but you keep your mind open with the many beauty things to inspire you,,from nature,,, a love,,, a event,,, or just a good jolly laugh at something funny,,, my friend,, my soft sweet voice has been silent for a long time,,, so I keep my mind open buy reading and reviewing,,, for I know my soft sweet voice is not silent,,, it is just me,,,too consumed with worldly interference ,,, just waiting on that one word o kick start me,,, great write,,, and a poem that many will relate to,,,blessings,my friend,,, sueellen
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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un fished utterance was a good write,,, as is your poem,, the very same issue,,, losing you muse for a period of time,,, but you keep your mind open with the many beauty things to inspire you,,from nature,,, a love,,, a event,,, or just a good jolly laugh at something funny,,, my friend,, my soft sweet voice has been silent for a long time,,, so I keep my mind open buy reading and reviewing,,, for I know my soft sweet voice is not silent,,, it is just me,,,too consumed with worldly interference ,,, just waiting on that one word o kick start me,,, great write,,, and a poem that many will relate to,,,blessings,my friend,,, sueellen
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2013
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Thank you Sueellen. Yes, I think every writer experiences it some time or other.