Book of Love
Nonet8 total reviews
Comment from Craigitar
Well done! I like the lighthearted and simple approach to an age-old problem...where to find love without the fear of heartbreak. A book might just be the perfect dating service. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Well done! I like the lighthearted and simple approach to an age-old problem...where to find love without the fear of heartbreak. A book might just be the perfect dating service. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rydere
Hi, This poem got me, but it is interesting? So is it talking about love, relationship, or a man who lost himself from the inside, but he loves all women. Is it love, tell me
Because I never heard something like this before but you got something that I like in your poems so please keep it up and your great work.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Hi, This poem got me, but it is interesting? So is it talking about love, relationship, or a man who lost himself from the inside, but he loves all women. Is it love, tell me
Because I never heard something like this before but you got something that I like in your poems so please keep it up and your great work.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for taking a look at this. It's a nonet which has nine lines and descends Dom 9 syllables in the first line to one syllable in the ninth.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Martin Chan
A nicely written nonet poem in simple format. The poet can deliver the exact theme to the reader by his wonderful composition and nice presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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A nicely written nonet poem in simple format. The poet can deliver the exact theme to the reader by his wonderful composition and nice presentation.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rhonny
This is another really good nonet poem. You kept to the requirements of the style. Your lines flow well and you haven't tried to force rhymes.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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This is another really good nonet poem. You kept to the requirements of the style. Your lines flow well and you haven't tried to force rhymes.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for this positive review.
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Comment from SteveY
Publish that book, and it will be an instant best seller! Wonderful thought and sentiment expressed in this very nicely done poem.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Publish that book, and it will be an instant best seller! Wonderful thought and sentiment expressed in this very nicely done poem.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you very much for looking at this and reviewing.
Comment from emjaihammond
Excellent phrasing and idea. In a book you can be anyone
you can be any way and you can leave any time you want to.
I like the thinking behind this
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Excellent phrasing and idea. In a book you can be anyone
you can be any way and you can leave any time you want to.
I like the thinking behind this
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Liz Dunbee
This is an excellent piece. I love the subject you chose for your nonet. You have certainly created a perfect poem which ties up very well in your last three lines. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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This is an excellent piece. I love the subject you chose for your nonet. You have certainly created a perfect poem which ties up very well in your last three lines. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from kiwijenny
An books .....I love going from the mundane to marvelous in a nano second with a good book....entering that new world ....
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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An books .....I love going from the mundane to marvelous in a nano second with a good book....entering that new world ....
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.