"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky I must say you have an unique way of telling us your story of eleven year and of your family.
I wish I had the talent ( like you) to write of my unusual life throughout my years
will see you later and continue with your Gifts of Life.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Hello Ricky I must say you have an unique way of telling us your story of eleven year and of your family.
I wish I had the talent ( like you) to write of my unusual life throughout my years
will see you later and continue with your Gifts of Life.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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OK,
Thanks and God bless You and Yours..
"And I say these things in the name
of "JESUS CHRIST"
Amen...
Ricky...
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you are welcome Ricky
Gert
Comment from ReaThomas
This is superbly well written. I love how it flows. Great piece and well structured. You have listed it as a story, but it is poetry. I would change that Ricky, because from my experience, you will get much more attention on this site with poetry than stories. Unless I am totally imagining this as being a poem... it doesn't have the structure of prose? Loved it, anyway.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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This is superbly well written. I love how it flows. Great piece and well structured. You have listed it as a story, but it is poetry. I would change that Ricky, because from my experience, you will get much more attention on this site with poetry than stories. Unless I am totally imagining this as being a poem... it doesn't have the structure of prose? Loved it, anyway.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Of course sir and thanks.
This I have heard previously...
Ranked as the number one writer{world}
on Swathmores and Covington's Who's
Who's" and ranked at 24th short script here
last year, perhaps I should attain number
one as Poet?
{a thought...
Richard. {Ricky1024}
Follow my "Yellow Book Road"
to learn as I search the
elements of Christ at every
And each turn....
Comment from mkflood
interesting story! i wanted to personally thank u for selecting my "blues city angle". im honored to be included with ur work. thanks again and great job!..mkflood
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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interesting story! i wanted to personally thank u for selecting my "blues city angle". im honored to be included with ur work. thanks again and great job!..mkflood
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I've used it many, many, times
previously when I write on Jason's
fantastic life.
Richard. {Ricky1024.}
Comment from tbacha58
Hi Ricky, you can't do that? its too short your story poem, please don't be late in writing the continuation. You see I am ready every single hour .
Thank you dear. Hugs Terry.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Hi Ricky, you can't do that? its too short your story poem, please don't be late in writing the continuation. You see I am ready every single hour .
Thank you dear. Hugs Terry.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thanks more and better written and waiting.
RES.
Comment from lakeport
Gifting your life, indeed what a giftet man, that's a very emotional expressed story. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Gifting your life, indeed what a giftet man, that's a very emotional expressed story. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Appreciation from a "Dancing Fool"
Karaoke Singer, 2,000 ranked and
Rated Chess Player{Lost once} and,
I suppose, a Gifted Writer...
Toot!!!
Ricky1024.
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your welcome.lakeport,
Comment from Eigle Rull
This piece is very interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It held my attention. It was a bit hard for me to grasp, but that is me, not you. I did find a couple of spots that might be mistakes, that I will point out here - you can decide if they are or are not mistakes:
I dies (died?)in a car accident and my brain swelled
they said...
Easter (Eastern) Standard Time.
Best regards my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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This piece is very interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. It held my attention. It was a bit hard for me to grasp, but that is me, not you. I did find a couple of spots that might be mistakes, that I will point out here - you can decide if they are or are not mistakes:
I dies (died?)in a car accident and my brain swelled
they said...
Easter (Eastern) Standard Time.
Best regards my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Thanks for that, there actually was
another and extra E.
Ricky.
PS. Let a female read the conclusion
{written} she will cry..
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What is the name of the continued story here - I would like to read it. Is it up yet?
Always with respect,
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"Gifting your Life." In about 15 minutes... Rich.