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Comment from 9999pool
Another good muse about the dragonfly. Dreaming of love and wishing for a good hunting day or a mate, life goes on abated and so much of freedom in the air.
Good write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Another good muse about the dragonfly. Dreaming of love and wishing for a good hunting day or a mate, life goes on abated and so much of freedom in the air.
Good write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thank you Ritchie.
Comment from adewpearl
is it just me or do the rules for these fusion forms make you smile just a little too? LOL
solid rhymes
even though you've modified the rules, which are modifications of other forms...LOL
I just love the humor of this romantic bug encounter LOL :-) Brooke
btw - fantastic photo!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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is it just me or do the rules for these fusion forms make you smile just a little too? LOL
solid rhymes
even though you've modified the rules, which are modifications of other forms...LOL
I just love the humor of this romantic bug encounter LOL :-) Brooke
btw - fantastic photo!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Thanks Brooke. Yes, I do smile at them. Fusion forms is a good description of them.
Comment from l.raven
Oh Let me tell you. When your in love your eyes can tell the story. They say it all. Just in one look. very well said and picture perfect. Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Oh Let me tell you. When your in love your eyes can tell the story. They say it all. Just in one look. very well said and picture perfect. Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Linda.
Comment from DanielEkine
A gorgeous work from the author as always.
"Why am I gogli-eyed?
I'm at a loss,
As my eyes cross,
Then turn and toss.
My love can't be denied! " my best part.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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A gorgeous work from the author as always.
"Why am I gogli-eyed?
I'm at a loss,
As my eyes cross,
Then turn and toss.
My love can't be denied! " my best part.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Thank you Daniel.
Comment from Gungalo
Why am I gogli-eyed?
I'm at a loss,
As my eyes cross,
Then turn and toss.
My love can't be denied!
Well I would have said googly-eyed if it were me. LOL but you have created your own. Hehee. It's a great write Tom.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Why am I gogli-eyed?
I'm at a loss,
As my eyes cross,
Then turn and toss.
My love can't be denied!
Well I would have said googly-eyed if it were me. LOL but you have created your own. Hehee. It's a great write Tom.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Gungalo.
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Comment from ravenblack
Of course you are speaking of the bugs and not the thrashing of the tent ( though both can cross the eyes) . Very playful poem. Next time I'll think twice before swatting a mosquito.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Of course you are speaking of the bugs and not the thrashing of the tent ( though both can cross the eyes) . Very playful poem. Next time I'll think twice before swatting a mosquito.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thanks Ravenblack. Go ahead and swat those mosquitoes
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your title and new form (to me). I admired your rhymes and wonderful photograph. I liked your speaking in the first person to add more immediacy as well. More cheers from Colorado- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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I enjoyed your title and new form (to me). I admired your rhymes and wonderful photograph. I liked your speaking in the first person to add more immediacy as well. More cheers from Colorado- Joan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you Joan. Colorado is my favorite state. Loved living in the Springs.
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More hellos from your favorite state. Rocky Mountain National Park is spectacular even with thunderstorms. We hope to do some walking around tomorrow. Sweet dreams- Joan
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Awesome!
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Smiles- J
Comment from CornishChick
You make my day! We have dragonflies everywhere right now (Lowcountry GA) and I'll never look at them the same again. Promise.
After reading your explanation of Susnika, my response was, "Say WHAT?" Do you teach poetry? If not, you should think about it. I read every explanation of every poem and appreciate it so much.
You're a natural born teacher. And if you can get me to read and appreciate poetry - you're the best!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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You make my day! We have dragonflies everywhere right now (Lowcountry GA) and I'll never look at them the same again. Promise.
After reading your explanation of Susnika, my response was, "Say WHAT?" Do you teach poetry? If not, you should think about it. I read every explanation of every poem and appreciate it so much.
You're a natural born teacher. And if you can get me to read and appreciate poetry - you're the best!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Thank you ashowalter. I appreciate the comments and the compliment. No, I don't teach poetry, but in my previous employment I was a trainer. Glad I could help expand your horizon a bit, in a small way.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
Excellent,mastery of the technical and the expressive.Of A feeling that I have felt many times usually to no avail. Possibly good since some lose their heads.
Preston
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
Excellent,mastery of the technical and the expressive.Of A feeling that I have felt many times usually to no avail. Possibly good since some lose their heads.
Preston
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2013
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Thank you Preston. Haha, that's a good one!
Comment from sunnilicious
Great up close and personal photograph. Creative poetic writing with wonderful visual imagery. Good form with rhymes. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Great up close and personal photograph. Creative poetic writing with wonderful visual imagery. Good form with rhymes. Excellent work.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Thank you Sunni, just a bit of fun.