Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Exceptional

I am very far behind in my reviews and found I had overlooked this one. I love it, the message is sound and rings true to your conviction of freedom to believe in God. Together we sail, apart we fail. Wonderful, also to answer a question you had asked in a later reply. This is a perfect usage of Capitals. However, it is always up to the way you want to present your write. I sometimes center mine as well. Have a great day. Carolyn

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013

You gave me a six. I am doing a victory lasp.

Norm

Comment from rhonny

Good

It moves along quite nicely with a good rhythm. Just one thing, in the third line you don't need the word 'of' Very nic pic too. :O)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Thanks for the info. I made the change. Of was not needed.

Norm

Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

Your message is a strong one and you have presented
it in style. I agree that together we are much
stronger than apart and only with God are we going to sail instead of fail.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. It is greatly appreciated.

Norm