Words Make or Break!
Word power in making or breaking your personality. 96 words64 total reviews
Comment from ccgal1010
This means much to me. It tells a truth that not many people have told and understood. What you said about words is absolutely true. I agree with every bit of truth you said.
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This means much to me. It tells a truth that not many people have told and understood. What you said about words is absolutely true. I agree with every bit of truth you said.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from in777wr#
Yes, we do need to be careful about what we say. Words can affect people in many way for many years. I like the truth that is in this message. This is a good message.
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Yes, we do need to be careful about what we say. Words can affect people in many way for many years. I like the truth that is in this message. This is a good message.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from justmarly
Words make or break you.
Words used wisely give you name, fame or endow your personality with gems. Words used unwisely can defame or condemn your personality or distort your name.
This so true. Keep up the good work. MJ
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Words make or break you.
Words used wisely give you name, fame or endow your personality with gems. Words used unwisely can defame or condemn your personality or distort your name.
This so true. Keep up the good work. MJ
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a very apt and fitting post. Words are a very powerful thing indeed. As they say, the pen is mightier than the sword. We can do so much good or evil with our words. We must make sure that it is good.
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This is a very apt and fitting post. Words are a very powerful thing indeed. As they say, the pen is mightier than the sword. We can do so much good or evil with our words. We must make sure that it is good.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2013
Comment from Razz
Nicely done.
Well stated.
I believe it is our actions that make us or break us. It is our actions that define us and show who we are.
To each their own.
Some good thoughts there.
Have a good day.
Razz
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Nicely done.
Well stated.
I believe it is our actions that make us or break us. It is our actions that define us and show who we are.
To each their own.
Some good thoughts there.
Have a good day.
Razz
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
Comment from Raver
Good comment. It makes you think before you speak to someone. Words can build you up or bring you down.
Thanks for posting.
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Good comment. It makes you think before you speak to someone. Words can build you up or bring you down.
Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
Comment from Matthew M.
Words are powerful and so is wisdom. A wise person is cautious with his words. People do become wiser in time like this essay says.
Words should be used wisely in people,
would read a lot better if it said, by instead of in.
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Words are powerful and so is wisdom. A wise person is cautious with his words. People do become wiser in time like this essay says.
Words should be used wisely in people,
would read a lot better if it said, by instead of in.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
Comment from Halfree
You have me in a quandary. I understand what you say and agree. If you have written 51,000 reviews and if they were in English, then you should have a better grasp of the mechanics of the language.
Think this needs a lot of work to get the mechanics of the language to work.
The last paragraph really needs some work.
I think "Words should be used wisely," would be a great introduction. The second sentence:"Words can make of break you." These two sentences frame your essay. Great thoughts, but awkward.
Do not quite get "Fate is an exception."
Think this has merit and needs some rewrite.
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You have me in a quandary. I understand what you say and agree. If you have written 51,000 reviews and if they were in English, then you should have a better grasp of the mechanics of the language.
Think this needs a lot of work to get the mechanics of the language to work.
The last paragraph really needs some work.
I think "Words should be used wisely," would be a great introduction. The second sentence:"Words can make of break you." These two sentences frame your essay. Great thoughts, but awkward.
Do not quite get "Fate is an exception."
Think this has merit and needs some rewrite.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
Comment from josieg521
Very well expressed. Words should always be used in a positive manner and I believe that there is always a way to say something in a good way if you really think about it hard enough. Good job.
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Very well expressed. Words should always be used in a positive manner and I believe that there is always a way to say something in a good way if you really think about it hard enough. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013
Comment from LeMuseNoir
Interesting. A bit sparse perhaps but with a certain spare intensity that challenges the reader. Almost reads like a grouping of koans.
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Interesting. A bit sparse perhaps but with a certain spare intensity that challenges the reader. Almost reads like a grouping of koans.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2013