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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from donkeyoatey
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Do you ever find that a bad dream will stay with you for days? I do..and this picture was the outcome of such a dream..the feel of being unable to stop the destrution. Your peom reminded me of that, it has the feel of the night terrors so well described! thanks so much for choosing my artwork! Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
    Hi Donkey: Thanks for the great review. It is appreciated. I can't remember mydreams in the morning. Then again I don't know if I want to.

    Norm
Comment from Ekim777
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Behind our bright, conscious side falls a shadow, like a tunnel and there reside inferior things, where even the ghosts and demons are disfigured. Some never get passed these horrors. They withdraw in fear, guilt and shame. But those with persistence, descend lower into the light. They followed a vision, call it a vision where life has new meaning. Call it soul. We each have one. As The great playwright; Eugene o' Neil said. "Life is not a long day's journey into night. It is a long day's journey into light."
Ekim777

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
    You are great and I love your comments.

    Norm
Comment from DanielEkine
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Most fascinating art work, I have seen all day.
Beautiful writing.
I shake before you, I cower and hid. It's definitely true nightmares can be exploding in a scary way.
Best part for me.
"Ogres of hell
I screech your name
You are my Lord
And I am your sheep
I tremble before you
Your fear abounds in me
I bow to you
I pray to you"

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
    I am glad you liked he poem. It is a bit dark but that is me.

    Norm