Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

The only negative I would have is that I would've found a similar picture but with birds flying high in the distance. Otherwise a nicely written poem and lay-out with coordinating colors. Good job.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

I'll look at it again.

Norm

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Mountain peaks, rainbows, forest, birds and sunshine...... add children and you just hit a multitude of my favorite things....I love the way you end with ... And it is the truth I need to know. Nicely done Norm, Carolyn

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

I think I love you.

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 16-Jul-2013

:-) good night

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Great little poem. I'm always a sucker for poems about nature and you've captured my imagination in this one. Very well written.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. I'm not really sure that I deserve it but I will take it.

Norm

Comment from rhonny

Good

You've made a pretty good attempt at your questioning of Nature. Your metaphors and images help your words along. However there are a few errors. FORREST doesn't need a capital. WEST does need one. I think TRUTH needs a capital.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2013

Thanks for letting me knpow of the errors. I read the poem and realizewd I deserved 4 stars.

Thanks,

Norm