Comment from
4tun81
Be yourself. You are the only one who can be.
From a technical perspective you might change the font color so it could be read more easily and try to adjust into the 5-7-5 format.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
Comment from
Solitude Poet
Hey there!
Nice words yet the format for 5-7-5 poetry is not what you have written. It doesn't match! Please check the rules but your wordings are excellent! :)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013