Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

Is the pic of you or your dad. Is that your horse. Are you a trainer or what. A poem tells a story of a person (you) coming to realize that no one is perfect;that God forgives with unconditional love no matter what, no matter what -- and it is hard to accept oneself for one of Gods children. What's even harder is to love oneself. You can't love another fully and unconditionally until you can love yourself. Nice poem and picture. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013

The picture is not mine. I do need forgiveness.

reply by zeldasmith on 02-Jul-2013

We all need forgiveness everyday. Even the pope goes to confession daily. Don't sell yourself short.

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013

Happy fourth,

Norm

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi sholessjo,
This definitely shares all the positives of confidence and inner awareness of who you are as a person.
Great job pulling all the inner power you feel into words penned here. Strong thoughts and some great word choices to give the reader a better image of you and all you are.
Thanks for sharing it. Loved the picture.:)
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013

Hi: What would I have to have done to the poem to earn 6 stars? I am new to the sight and wonder if there is an answer.

Thanks,

Norm

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Good message, well expressed. Yes, we are basically all the same. We're all flawed, we all feel the same emotions, we all know love and joy and sorrow and grief. We are human. So it's all right not to be perfect, just be yourself. Thanks for the reminder. :)

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2013

Hi: What would I have to have done to the poem to earn 6 stars? I am new to the sight and wonder if there is an answer

Thanks,

Norm